Alexandra
My best travel experience. I want talking about my most memorable experience. It was the trip to Bulgaria, I had three years ago with my dance group to participate in international dance festival. This journey was already second, I had without parents. And I had a lot of fan and got a very good imression. I was travelling by plane for the first time in my life. My mum worried a lot, but everithing went swimmingly. I was staing there during near two weeks and it was happiest time of my life. Except our perfomances there, where we have got too exicement, almost every morning we spent for swimming in the blue Bulgarian sea and sunbathing on a sandy beach. (Once we have ever yachted!) But warm Bulgarian nights is that I adored most of all. It was time of joy, lights, music and summer parties. This journey give me many wonderful memories, I will cherish forever.
Sep 21, 2014 7:46 PM
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My best travel experience.

 

I want to talking about my most memorable experience. It was the trip to Bulgaria, I had three years ago with my dance group to participate in an/the international dance festival. This journey was already the second, I had taken without my parents. And I had a lot of fan fun and got had a very good impression. I was travelling by plane for the first time in my life. My mum worried a lot, but everything went swimmingly. I was staing stayed there during nearly two weeks and it was the happiest time of my life. Except for our perfomances there, where we have got too exicement, almost every morning we spent for swimming in the blue Bulgarian sea and sunbathing on a sandy beach. Once we have ever even yachted! But the warm Bulgarian nights is that what I adored most of all. It was a time of joy, lights, music and summer parties. This journey give gave me many wonderful memories, that/which I will cherish forever.

September 21, 2014
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My best travel experience.

I want to talk about my most memorable experience. It was the trip to Bulgaria I had three years ago with my dance group to participate in an international dance festival. This journey was already the second I had without parents, and I had a lot of fun and got a very good imression. I was travelling by plane for the first time in my life. My mum worried a lot, but everything went swimmingly. I was staying there during near two weeks and it was the happiest time of my life. Except for our performances there, where we had too exicement, almost every morning we spent for swimming in the blue Bulgarian sea and sunbathing on a sandy beach. Once we have ever yachted! But warm Bulgarian nights are what I adored most of all. It was a time of joy, lights, music and summer parties. This journey gave me many wonderful memories that I will cherish forever.

 

[<em>Good work.  Remember your articles (a, an, the).  Many Russian speakers have trouble with them.</em>]

September 21, 2014
Horosho. sounds like a fun trip. I never thought of Bulgaria as a vacation spot.
September 21, 2014
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