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Anna had a special jersey Anna had a special jersey that her junior high friend Ben gave her. And there was a big taquito printed on the jersey. She was a celebrity at that time. It’s not because of her father, who was a principal, but her talent in making taquitos. It seemed there was some magic in her taquitos. People felt happy, and could relief their stress when taking a little bite. Anna was destined to be a magic cook. However everything changed after she got her driving license. Her friends loved to ask her out in the evening because she had a car with stick shift. One evening, one of her friends wanted to try driving. Her friend can drive an automatic one, but never worked on the stick shift. It was dark. A drunkard happened to jump out in the street. Her friend wasnt used to the stick shift . So their car was almost hitting the poor drunkard. Luckily, the man was pulled back by someone. But the near accident really scared Anna. She always had nightmares after that. The accident made her hallucinate. Sometimes she thought they hit the poor man in her dream. She could not stay focused on making taquitos. She had a crisis. People didn't feel relax after taking her taquitos. And she started think about quitting making it… Anna felt super upset and stress. Her friend Ben was a magician by nature. He told Anna that it’s a challenge. God took her gift for a little while. But it would be back. The only one thing Anna needed to do was to believe herself and moved on from the near accident. Also, Ben gave Anna a jersey which made her remember her talent… (It's not finished. I will be highly appriciated if anyone interest in creating an ending for my story.)
Sep 22, 2014 1:57 PM
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Anna had a special jersey

Anna had a special jersey that her junior high friend Ben gave her.
And there was a big taquito printed on the jersey.

She was a celebrity at that time. It’s not because of her father, who was a principal, but her talent in making taquitos. It seemed there was some magic in her taquitos. When After taking a little bite, people felt happy, and could relieved of relief their stress when taking a little bite. Anna was destined to be a magic cook.

However, everything changed after she got her driving license. Her friends loved to ask her out in the evening because she had a car with stick shift. One evening, one of her friends wanted to try driving. Her friend can drive an automatic one, but never worked on the stick shift. It was dark. A drunkard happened to jumped out into the street. Her friend wasn't used to the stick shift . So, their car was almost hitting the poor drunkard. Luckily, the man was pulled back by someone.

But the near accident really scared Anna. She always had nightmares after that. The accident made her hallucinate. Sometimes she thought they hit the poor man in her dream. She could not stay focused on making taquitos. She had a crisis. People didn't feel relaxed after taking  eating her taquitos. And She started to think about quitting making them it

Anna felt super upset and stressed. Her friend, Ben, was a magician by nature. He told Anna that it’s a challenge. God took her gift for a little while, but it would be back. The only one thing Anna needed to do was to believe in herself and moved on from the near accident. Also, Ben gave Anna a jersey which made her remember her talent…

(It's not finished. I will be highly appriciated if anyone interest in creating an ending for my story.)

September 22, 2014
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