ivyliang
Back to campus It is about fortnight since the new semester came. Although I am a junior at college,yet I am still not used to the life living in school. I guess I was indulged in the summer vacation. I notice that my classmates always go to library to study, which makes me feel pressured. Actually, everyone can choose the life style for oneself. It depends on what your career path or life goals. To a large extent, it's up to you. As a junior, I know that it is only 2 years left for me to consider the future life and job goals. It is the last period of time for me to waste, to do what you want to do, even to go to the dream place alone, or watch a live Sports Match or a concert for your favorite stars. Anyway, just enjoy and never let yourself regret.
Sep 23, 2014 6:51 AM
Corrections · 2
1

Back to campus

It is about a fortnight since the new semester came. Although I am a junior at college, I am still not used to living at school <em>(OR </em>"I am still not used to the life at school). I guess I was indulged in the summer vacation. I notice that my classmates always go to the library to study, which makes me feel pressured. Actually, everyone can choose their own life style (<em>OR</em> "Actually, everyone can choose the lifestyle they want for themselves"). It depends on what your career path is or life goals. To a large extent, it's up to you.

As a junior, I know that it is only two years left for me to consider my future life and job goals. It is the last period of time I have to waste, to do what I want to do, even to go to the dream place alone, or watch a live Sports Match or a concert of my favorite stars.

Anyway, just enjoy life and never let yourself regret it.

 

Hi Ivy, that was well written. You have chosen some difficult ideas to write about, and this made the grammar difficult also. 

You correctly used the word "indulged", but we wouldn't normally describe ourselves that way. We would normally "indulge" a child and not so much an adult. Instead you could say "I guess I had it easy in the summer vacation."

The last paragraph I read as if it was you talking about yourself, and not about others. That is why I suggested the changes to "I" and "my". 


Life doesn't stop when you finish your studies! There is still lots of concerts, movies, parties.. Study hard and live hard!

October 5, 2014
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!