Learn better when having fun! Hello everyone. I'm here to improve my English (or French), and I'd like to make nice conversation. Just to give you an idea, I love this piece of the "Little Prince"

Hope - Italian Girl

Learn better when having fun! Hello everyone. I'm here to improve my English (or French), and I'd like to make nice conversation. Just to give you an idea, I love this piece of the "Little Prince" by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry: «Grown-ups like numbers. When you tell them about a new friend, they never ask questions about what really matters. They never ask: "What does His voice sound like?" "What games does he like best?" "Does he collect butterflies?". They ask: "How old is he?" "How many brothers does he have?" "How much does he weigh?" "How much money does His father make?" Only then do they think they know him.» So, I don't care what job does who writes or his social position. Tell me what you like, your favorite color, your ideals, nice memories. In short, be free as children, outside the box that life imposes us. We are here to learn having fun. :-) Thank you so much for your corrections, they are very precious for me! See you all!

Sep 23, 2014 12:24 PM

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Learn better when having fun!

Hello everyone. I'm here to improve my English (or French), and I'd like to make nice conversation.

Just to give you an idea, I love this piece of the "Little Prince" by Antoine de Saint-Exupéry: «Grown-ups like numbers. When you tell them about a new friend, they never ask questions about what really matters. They never ask: "What does His voice sound like?" "What games does he like best?" "Does he collect butterflies?". They ask: "How old is he?" "How many brothers does he have?" "How much does he weigh?" "How much money does His father make?" Only then do they think they know him.»

So, I don't care what job does who writes or his social position.

Not clear to me what you want to say.

Maybe: So, I don't care what job you do, or your social position.

Or: So, I don't care what about the job or social position of the person who is writing.

Tell me what you like, your favorite color, your ideals, nice memories. In short, be free as children, outside the box that life imposes us. We are here to learn having fun. :-)

Thank you so much for your corrections, they are very precious for me!

See you all!

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Nice!

September 23, 2014

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