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Chinese girls really too pity Tonight my monther said i need consider find a boy friend and seriouse think about marry.But i think i am too young to think of marry,I am only 23years old,when i find job i hope i can enjoy my life frist then take a boy friend not now.But my mother said like my age girls,was born after 1990s girls already had boy friend...,i really feel so annoying for this,but when i go to classmate or friends wedding i always go alone,also feel strange,i really hate it so mich!!!I want to freedom!!!!
Sep 23, 2014 1:38 PM
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Chinese girls really too pity

Tonight my monther said i need consider find a boy friend and seriouse think about marry.But i think i am too young to think of marry,I am only 23years old,when i find job i hope i can enjoy my life frist then take a boy friend not now.But my mother said like my age girls,was born after 1990s girls already had boy friend...,i really feel so annoying for this,but when i go to classmate or friends wedding i always go alone,also feel strange,i really hate it so mich!!!I want to freedom!!!!

 

Good job. There are a few little mistakes, but I rewrote the whole think the way a native speaker would say it. I hope it helps. 

 

Tonight my mom said I need to start looking for a boyfriend and seriously thinking about marriage. I think I'm too young to worry about getting married right now, I'm only 23. After I find a job and enjoy my life for a while then I can look for a boyfriend, but now isn't the right time. My mom says the other girls born in the 90s already have boyfriends. I get so annoyed when she says this. When I go to the weddings of my friends and classamtes I am always alone, it makes me feel so strange. I hate it so much! I just want to be free!!!

November 7, 2014
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