A little story I had to write a little speech yesterday for my English class with these words: "a man", "his wife", "a unicorn", "a psychiatrist", "a policeman", "a strait jacket", "the madhouse". Thi

Manuel Fernando

A little story I had to write a little speech yesterday for my English class with these words: "a man", "his wife", "a unicorn", "a psychiatrist", "a policeman", "a strait jacket", "the madhouse". This was the story. When a man arrived at home Her wife asked him: Hey did you buy the food for the unicorn? Her husband said her: What are you talking about? Her wife angrily replied him: You forgot to bring the food to unicorn and hasn't eaten nothing since on Morning. Her husband said her: Have you been smoking anything rare? Her wife suddenly began to destroy everything that were crossed in her way, some neighbours called the police by noises heard. When The police arrived at place, they could see as the woman is angrily destroying everything and shout "where is the unicorn's food". The police took her to madhouse with so much difficulty. A psychiatrist made her an analysis and found that her mind had mixed the real world with the imaginary world for read a lot of books of fairy tales. Since then she has had to wear a strait jacket by her violent behaviour.

Sep 23, 2014 4:08 PM

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A man arrived at home.

His wife asked him: Hey, did you buy food for the unicorn?

He answered: What are you talking about?

She angrily replied: You forgot to bring food for the unicorn, it hasn't eaten anything since this morning.

He said to her: Have you been smoking something?

With that, his wife suddenly began to destroy everything that crossed her path; some neighbours called the police based on the noises they heard. When the police arrived, they could see the woman angrily destroying everything and shouting "where is the unicorn's food?" The police promptly dragged her to the madhouse.

There, the psychiatrist made his analysis and found that she had mixed the real world with the imaginary world; reading lots of fairy tales seemed to be the cause. Ever since then she has had to wear a strait jacket to prevent her violent behaviour.

September 23, 2014

American English Corrections

A Little Story

I had to write a little speech yesterday for my English class with these words: "a man", "his wife", "a unicorn", "a psychiatrist", "a policeman", "a strait jacket", "the madhouse". This was the story.

When a man arrived at home, his wife asked him, "Hey did you buy the food for the unicorn?"

His husband said to her, "What are you talking about?"

His wife angrily replied to him, "You forgot to bring the food to the unicorn and it hasn't eaten anything since on Morning. "

Her husband said to her, "Have you been smoking something lately?"

His wife suddenly began to destroy everything that were crossed in her way her path. Some neighbours called the police because of all the noise they heard. When the police arrived at their place, they could see that the woman was angrily destroying everything and was shouting "Where is the unicorn's food?" The police took her to the madhouse with so much difficulty. but it wasn't easy.

A psychiatrist analyzed her and found that her mind had mixed the real world with the imaginary world because she had read too many books on or "about" fairy tales. Since then, she has had to wear a strait jacket because of her violent behaviour.

September 23, 2014

This is absolutely brilliant! Utterly fantastic! It's truly been a while since I've had that much fun 'correcting' a memo. Thank you, and good luck with your English studies. ^_^

September 23, 2014