Taking the IELTS Exam

I was preparing for my IELTS exam for about 45 days. They were tough days. At the end<em>[finally?]</em> I did it a few days ago, hoping to get what I had been searching<em></em> for <em>[expecting/aiming for/finding problematic?]?</em>. This period was purely for preparation, while I generally study had already stuied English for about 9 years separately from this.
My main goals are firstly to getting a grade allowing me to complete my higher education. Secondly, to be able for immigration to immigrate, as English proficiency is one of the mandatory requirements for the immigration process. What is more, (is) English is needed for work and various aspects of daily  (everyday)life aspects for any country you do not speak their language the language of which you do not speak/..any country whose language you do not speak. This is because English is a global language used in business and scientific society <em>(the scientific community/..used in business and science)</em>.

Finally I believe I did well. Maybe (perhaps) it is not well enough, however. It is my first try. I hope it will be the last one (..hope it will be my last).

Taking The IELTS Exam

I spent about 45 days preparing for my IELTS exam. Those were tough days. I did it a few days ago in the end, hoping to get what I sought. This period was purely for preparation, as I have been studying English for altogether 9 years.
My main goals are: firstly; getting a grade which allows me to complete my higher education, secondly; to be ready for immigration, as a level of proficiency in English is a requirement of the immigration process. And what's more, I need English for my work and daily life; as in any country when you don't speak the language. And because English is a global language; of both business and academia.

Finally, I would say that I did well, although it may not have been enough. However, it was my first try. I hope it will be the last one.