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Are College Years The Best Time In A Person's Life? As far as I’m concerned, these years have both memorable and worthless experiences. . On one hand, I think the college years are not the best times in my life because, I didn’t have money ever what was quite bothersome and embarrassing. I remember myself digging for a change in my room to buy copies of a book, or eating unhealthy food such as instant soups or fast food. Without a doubt It was always the same boring food. In addition, my friends and I used to drink boxed wine and cheap beer. Another gloomy situation of this stage was the confusion since; I didn’t know if my efforts would be worth it, or what I wanted to be. At the same time I was always tired and starving with shiny forehead and dry white lips. On the other hand, the college years enriched my life in many ways. They have provided me the necessary tools to enhance my engineering skills, as well as many wonderful memories. For instance, all those women friend with benefits, or the dating with someone drastically different from me in every possible way. Finally, the years at the collage gave me the opportunity to meet trust friends who are willing to stick around when the things get tough. I am still in touch with some of them. The college years certainly do provide us good and bad experience. However, I think each of them were useful to acquire the poise and confidence that we need to make decisions and seek new and better conditions of life.
Sep 23, 2014 7:54 PM
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Are College Years The Best Time In A Person's Life?

As far as I’m concerned, these years have both memorable and worthless (useless) experiences.
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On one hand, I think the college years are were not the best (I don't think college years were the best) times in my life<em></em> because, I didn’t have money ever<em>[I never had money]</em>, what which was quite bothersome and embarrassing. I remember myself digging for a change in my room to buy copies of a book (a) books/s), or eating unhealthy food such as instant soups or fast food <em>[both are fast food actually]</em>. Without a doubt, it was always the same boring food. In addition, my friends and I used to drink boxed wine and cheap beer. Another gloomy situation reality/outcome of this stage <em>[boring food, consumption of ethanol, poverty?]</em> was the confusion since; I didn’t know if (whether) my efforts would be worth it<em>(..efforts would ever amount to anything)</em>, or what I wanted to be. At the same time I was always tired and starving, with a shiny forehead<em>[sweaty or bald?]</em> and dry (chapped) white lips.

On the other hand, the college years enriched my life in many ways. They have provided me with the necessary tools to enhance my engineering skills, as well as many wonderful memories. For instance, all (those) women <em>[and men, unless you don't mind making people angry]</em> who have friends with benefits, or the   are dating with someone drastically different from me in every possible way. Finally, the years at the college gave me the opportunity to meet trusty friends who are willing to stick around when the things get tough/..when the going gets rough. I am still in touch with some of them.

The college years certainly do provide us good and bad experience. However, I think each of them <em>[each of whom?] </em>were useful to acquire the poise and confidence that we need to make decisions and seek new and better conditions of life conditions/arrangements in life.

September 23, 2014
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