Finally.... Well, it's been a few months since I wrote a note last time. I finally have got the enough time to write something here because I'm in the school holidays. I mean I really wanted to write

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Finally.... Well, it's been a few months since I wrote a note last time. I finally have got the enough time to write something here because I'm in the school holidays. I mean I really wanted to write many things here everyday if I could but I had been having busy days when I was at school because I had heaps of homework to do during the term 3 of my school, which was the main source driving me crazy. But at the same time, I honestly enjoyed being busy as well and when the end of the term's result came out, I thought that anything that I did to study was worth having because I had quite good marks for the subjects which I was talking during the term 3. Now, I'm on my bed typing these nonsense sentences which do not attract anyone to read but I think it's fine. Oh by the way, I started going to the gym lately and if anyone here loves working out, I guess we have to talk soon^^ I assume that I can write some notes here during the holidays so I will do my best.

Sep 28, 2014 7:10 AM

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Finally....

Well, it's been a few months since I last wrote a note last time. I finally have got the enough time to write something here because I'm in on the school holidays (or you can say: ..since I'm on holidays/because I don't have school for x weeks). I mean I really wanted to write many things here everyday if I could but I had have been having busy these days (depending on how you want to phrase it: ..but my days were busy/full/occupied) when I was at (or with) school because I had heaps of homework to do during the term 3 of my school, which was the main source driving me crazy. But at the same time, I honestly also enjoyed being busy as well and when the end of the term's results came out, I thought that anything everything that I did to study was worth having doing(?) (or it like Rachel said!) because I had quite good marks for the subjects which I was talking during the term 3. Now, I'm on my bed typing these nonsense sentences which do not attract anyone to read but I think it's fine. Oh by the way, I started going to the gym lately and if anyone here loves working out, I guess we have to talk soon^^
I assume that I can write some notes here during the holidays so I will do my best.

The last part is perfectly good :) the purple things and some of the things i crossed out aren't necessarily mistakes just other ways of saying the same thing in a more natural english way (according to me anyway ahah) I mean technically it isn't wrong but it sounds repetitive at times, overall you're good! and congrats on your term's results ;)

October 22, 2014

Finally....

Well, it's been a few months since I wrote a note last time. I finally have got the enough time to write something here because I'm on school holidays. I mean, I really wanted to write many things here, every day if I could, but I had been having busy days when I was at school. I had heaps of homework to do during the term 3 of my school, which was the main source driving me crazy. But at the same time, I honestly enjoyed being busy as well and when the end of the term's result came out, I thought that anything that I did to study was worth it because I had quite good marks for the subjects which I was taking during the term 3. Now, I'm on my bed typing these nonsense sentences which do not attract anyone to read but I think it's fine. Oh by the way, I started going to the gym lately and if anyone here loves working out, I guess we have to talk soon^^
I assume that I can write some notes here during the holidays so I will do my best.

Keep it up!

September 30, 2014

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