Flowers for Beloved I'm trying to do this note without using a dictionary. I'm in love with a girl and today is her birthday. We are in different towns. Distance beetwin us is not less then 6.000 kilo

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Flowers for Beloved I'm trying to do this note without using a dictionary. I'm in love with a girl and today is her birthday. We are in different towns. Distance beetwin us is not less then 6.000 kilometers. Of course, I would have loved to congratulate her. Praise God, nowdays we have got internet and mobile connection. I called her at 8 in the morning of her local time (my time was 3 p.m.) and we told more then an hour. Previously, I applied for a basket of flowers and ten red ballons to be deleivered to her. She received the present at her dore, just as she has intended to go out to the church, she used to attend on Sundays. She was surprised and admired, and I know she loves me. And I'm in love with her so much! What can help?..

Sep 28, 2014 9:16 AM

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Flowers for My Beloved

I'm trying to do this note without using a dictionary. I'm in love with a girl and today is her birthday. We are in different towns. The distance beetwin between us is not less then 6,000 kilometers ["kilometres" in British English]. Of course, I would have loved to congratulate her. Praise God ["Thank God" is more common, "praise God" is a little unusual but it makes sense], nowadays we have got internet and mobile connections. I called her at 8 in the morning of by her local time (my time was 3 p.m.) and we told talked ["told" is the past tense of the verb "tell"] for more than an hour. Previously, I applied for ordered a basket of flowers and ten red balloons to be deleivered to her. She received the present at her dore door, just as she has intended to go was going out to the church, she used to attends ["used to" refers to habitual activities in the past, her you just need the simple present, which generally indicates habitual activities in the present] on Sundays. She was surprised and admired impressed[?], and I know she loves me. And I'm in love with her so much [here you can either say "I'm so in love with her" or "I love her so much"]! What can help? [you can say either "What can I do?" or "I can't help it!"]

October 22, 2014

Flowers for Beloved

I'm trying to do this note without using a dictionary. I'm in love with a girl and today is her birthday. We are in different towns. The distance between beetwin us is not less then 6.000 kilometers. Of course, I would have loved to congratulate her. Praise God, nowdays we have got internet and mobile connection. I called her at 8 in the morning of her local time (my time was 3 p.m.) and we talked (or spoke) told for more then an hour. Previously, I ordered applied for a basket of flowers and ten red ballons to be deleivered delivered to her. She received the present at her job (or office) dore, just as she has intended to go out to the church, she used to attend on Sundays (just as she was leaving to for church). She was surprised and admired (I am not sure but you probably wanted to say suprised and happy), . and I know she loves me,. A and I'm in love with her so much! What can help?..