italki - Hi, world!!! Hi, world! I want to improve my English and find new friends. So, if you want to help m

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Hi, world!!! Hi, world! I want to improve my English and find new friends. So, if you want to help me or find new friend from Ukraine - write to me. Also I can help you with Russian or Ukrainian.

Sep 29, 2014 10:42 AM

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Hi, world!!!

Hi, world! I want to improve my English and find new friends. So, if you want to help me or find a new friend from Ukraine - write to me. In return, I can help you with Russian or Ukrainian.

September 30, 2014

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