Wendy Wang
The hard work I'm a high school student who will take college entrance examinations next year.I really changed in tne new term.I used to get up at 6 O'clock,but now I get up at 5:30,then do everything quickly and run to school.All I changed is for a good future.I must work hard.Only in this way can I be admitted by my favorite college.Maybe you can't understand why I work so hard,but in China it is reasonable.Hope my dream come true next year. I love languege,I have learned English for many years,but my spoken-English is poor.If you are a native English speaker and want to learn Chinese,you can touch me.I'm waiting for you! That's all,thank you for correcting my mistakes!!!
Sep 30, 2014 11:08 AM
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The hard work

I'm a high school student who will take college entrance examinations next year. I really changed in the new term. I used to get up at 6 o'clock, but now I get up at 5:30, then do everything quickly and run to school. All I changed is for a good future. I  must work hard. Only in this way can I be admitted by at my favorite college. Maybe you can't understand why I work so hard, but in China it is reasonable. Hope my dream will come true next year.
I love language, I have been learning learned English for many years, but my spoken-English is poor. If you are a native English speaker and want to learn Chinese, you can get in  touch me. I'm waiting for you!
That's all, thank you for correcting my mistakes!!!

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September 30, 2014
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