Jenny
Shopping Spree I haven't bought any clothes for a couple of years. I just kept telling myself that I would buy nice, decent clothes once I got a better job or after I shed some more weights and stay in shape. I always came up with lame excuses and blew off the chances to buy clothes even when I was at the mall. Now I look back on it, I guess I was't really happy with what I was or how I looked and chose not to treat myself properly. The sad thing is I haven't even realized all these, up until my best friend forced me so hard to buy any clothes at the mall, where I brought him to get himself a birthday present. He refused to take anything from me and bore with me the entire shopping. I couldn't be any happier today :)
Sep 30, 2014 2:51 PM
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Shopping Spree

I haven't bought any clothes for a couple of years. I just kept telling myself that I would buy nice, decent clothes once I got a better job or after I shed some more weights and stayed in shape. I always came up with lame excuses and blew off the chances to buy clothes even when I was at the mall.

Now I look back on it, I guess I wasn't really happy with what I was [grammatically, "what I was" is fine, but we would usually say "where I was (in life)"] or how I looked and chose not to treat myself properly. The sad thing is I hadn't even realized all these this, up until my best friend forced me to hard to buy any some clothes at the mall, where I had brought him to get himself a birthday present. He refused to take anything from me and was bored with me the entire shopping trip. I couldn't be any happier today :)

September 30, 2014
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Shopping Spree

I haven't bought any clothes for a couple of years. I just kept telling myself that I would buy nice, decent clothes once I got a better job or after I shed some more weight and stay in shape. I always came up with lame excuses and blew off the chances to buy clothes even when I was at the mall.

Now I look back on it, I guess I was't really happy with what I was or how I looked and chose not to treat myself properly. The sad thing is I haven't even realized all these things, up until my best friend forced me so hard to buy some clothes at the mall, where I brought him to get himself a birthday present. He refused to take anything from me and bore with me the entire shopping. I couldn't be any happier today :)

 

This is very good.I am not sure about the word "bore" at the end.Not sure what you mean exactly.

September 30, 2014
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