Alexz
A visit to SANTORINI A VISIT SANTORINI The island of Santorini takes place in the southeast of Greece. The area is approximately of 72 km2 with a population of 14.000 people. Every year, tourists are charmed with the loveliness of this site. There are many features that make this place remarkable overall. Classic white-covered buildings are seemed to be leaned without gravity in the cliffs. In addition, the island offers plenty of opportunities to relax and to explore its calming surroundings. Indeed, some volcanic-sand beaches must be visited, where the heavenly blue sea gathers the black dark sand. It is popularly believed that is one of the greatest attractions of the world. Despite being a small island, its magic and beauty is endless.
Sep 30, 2014 9:32 PM
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A visit to SANTORINI

A VISIT TO SANTORINI

The island of Santorini takes place is in the southeast of Greece. The Its area is approximately of 72 km2 with a population of 14,.000 people. Every year, tourists are charmed with by the loveliness of the island this site.

There are many features that make this place remarkable overall. The classic white painted buildings seem to lean against gravity from the cliffs.

In addition, the island offers plenty of opportunities to relax and to explore the tranquil surroundings. Indeed, some volcanic sand beaches must be visited, where the heavenly blue sea meets the black dark sand.


It is popularly believed that Santorini is one of the greatest attractions of the world. Despite being a small island, its magic and beauty is endless.

 

Alexz:- It would be better to keep things simple for the moment. It is also important to keep the main ideas firmly in mind as you write. You might want to think about spending more time speaking rather than writing at this stage. Once the speaking is going well then it is a simple matter of writing down what you say.

September 30, 2014
Cool. I couldn't find any mistakes! ;)
September 30, 2014
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