The national holiday of China
It's the National holiday of China. The Chinese government moves several working days together and turns them into a seven-day holiday, lasting from Oct. 1st to Oct. 7th. Also known as 'Golden Week,' this holiday [maybe add something positive about it, beyond the fact that it is a holiday]. However, the desirability of 'Golden Week' has become a contentious issue. During 'Golden Week,' public areas are crowded, roads are heavily congested, and the prices of many tourist sites rise significantly. It can seem somewhat chaotic at times, and many people feel quite tired when it is all said and done. Thus, many people have recently suggested to instead have a paid leave as soon as possible.
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The national holiday of China
It's the National holiday of China. The Chinese government moves serveral working days together and make it to be a seven-day holiday, which is from 1st Oct to 7th Oct. Such holiday is called 'golden week'. Everywhere is crowded, roads are heavily congested, and the prices of many tourist sites rise significantly. So, many people feel tired. The reasonability of 'golden week' remains a contentious issue. Many people thus suggest having a paid leave instead as soon as possible.
