A Bird Man I see in the image a man with a head of bird. It looks like a mix of both. He's is looking to a bird that seems to be dead because it is belly up. In the picture seems to be night because o

Otávio Celani

A Bird Man I see in the image a man with a head of bird. It looks like a mix of both. He's is looking to a bird that seems to be dead because it is belly up. In the picture seems to be night because of the darkness. The shadows appears in the wall is because of some light that comes behind of the Bird Man. I think the image is from a horror movie of a Bird Man that feels sorry of the dead bird and wants a vengeance.

Oct 9, 2014 9:26 PM

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A Bird Man

I see in the image a man with a head of a bird. It looks like a mix of both. He's is looking at a bird that seems to be dead because it is belly up. In the picture it seems to be night because of the darkness. The shadows appear on the wall because of some light that comes from behind the Bird Man. I think the image is from a horror movie of a Bird Man that feels sorry for the dead bird and wants vengeance.

October 24, 2014

A Bird Man

I see in the image a man with the head of a bird/wearing a bird's head. It He looks like a mix of both man and bird/half man half bird. He's is looking to down on a bird that seems to be dead, because it is belly-up. In the picture it seems/appears to be night/night-time because of the darkness (this is better expressed with 'darkness' as the subject 'The darkness suggests ...). The Shadows appear/A shadow appears on the wall is because of some light that comes behind of the Bird Man. I think the image is from a horror movie of a Bird Man that feels sorry of for the dead bird and wants a (no article) vengeance.

No indefinite article for 'vengeance' here (haha but there is a phrase 'with a vengeance'! ) - I cannot explain why!

October 9, 2014

A Bird Man

I see in the image a man with a head of bird. It looks like a mix of both. He's is looking to at a bird that seems to be dead because it is belly up. In the picture seems to be night because of the darkness.The darkness suggests it's evening (or you could say- "It seems to be evening as it's dark"). The shadows appears in on the wall is because of some light that comes from behind of the Bird Man. I think the image is from a horror movie of a Bird Man that feels sorry of for the dead bird and wants a vengeance.

Well done! you made a good attempt. Some of your prepositions werent quite right. We would saying "looking at" or "looking towards" rather than "looking to"

We say feel sorry for - if referring to feeling sorry for a person or animal,

The shadows are third person plural- we only add s to the verb in 3rd person singular

Hope that helps :)

October 9, 2014

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