Yoichi
I want my payment to be raised. I have a oppotunity to be raised my payment in this October 31. I have a confidence, because I have done my work exactly and quickly. I always finish my work till the deadline and help other people. There is no reason to be looked down. I think the only issue is my boss is tight-fisted. Probably she will make many reason not to be raised my payment. How do I fight with her ? I would like to hear your opinions.
Oct 19, 2014 3:07 PM
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I want my salary  to be raised.

I have a oppotunity to get a raise in my salary on  October 31.
I am confident, because I have done my work efficientlyand quickly.
I always finish my work by the deadline and help other people.
There is no reason to be looked down. (?)
I think the only issue is my boss is tight-fisted.
Probably she will find many reasons not to raise my salary.
How do I fight with her ? I would like to hear your opinions.

 

I don't think fighting with her is a good option.It might be better to try and have a quiet talk with her privately and point out why you think you are a good worker and deserve to get a raise.Then you might be able to convince her.

October 19, 2014
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I want my payment to be raised. 

I have an oppotunity for my pay to be raised on Octover 31
I have a confidence, because I have done my work correctly and quickly.
I always finish my work before the deadline and help other people.
There is no reason why I should be looked down on. (this sounds more natural)
I think the only issue is my boss is tight-fisted. 
She will probably give many reasons why my pay will not be raised   (Again sounds more natural)
How do I confront her about this? (You don't want to "fight" her.) I would like to hear your opinions.

 

You have very good english skills, you just need to work on making it flow better. 
I hope things work out with your boss! 

 

 

TIP:

"I have AN oppotunity for my pay to be raised on Octover 31."

"AN", comes before any word starting with a vowel (A,E,I,O,U) 

EG:

An apartment

An Orange 

An Eagle 

An Umbrella

An Insect

Only use "AN" when the next word starts with a vowel - anyother time it does not work. 

EG:

A cat

A dog

A person

A lemon

etc...

October 20, 2014
I don't know. Maybe, it's not a good idea to fight with her. If she does not increase your salary, silently look for a new job with a salary you will be satisfied.
October 19, 2014
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