Luna2014
how do we definite "friends"? At first , I would like to take this opportunity to express my appreciation for the great help and encourage with my English from italkit and those who I have never met .We are strange but you do me a favour indeedly. Sometimes,I ask myself what is a friend and what kind of friends do I want .I treat my friends sincerely ,we go trips and share happiness together.But when it concerns profits, evenone gets selfish.When I need help ,my friends disappear , no one shall help me but the God.I feel being betrayed and hurt when such affairs happened .I think I lost trust to others.Do I have excessive expectation on others ?I always feel being left alone. Though I have social community tools like telephone and QQ,I always find to no one to talk .Gradually, I donot want to update my state on Internet and not to kown what's on others .I choose to close my mind.I am afraid I scare to communicate with others.
Oct 20, 2014 3:03 AM
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How do we definite "friends"?

At first, I would like to take this opportunity to express my appreciation for the great help and encouragement with my English from italki and those whom I have never met. We are strangers but you do me a favour indeed. Sometimes, I ask myself, "what is a friend, and what kind of friends do I want?" I treat my friends sincerely ,we go trips and share happiness together. But when it concerns profits, evenone gets selfish.When I need help, my friends disappear, no one shall help me but God. I feel betrayed and hurt when such affairs happen. I think I lost trust in others. Do I have excessive expectations of others? I always feel that I am being left alone. Though I have social community tools like the telephone and QQ,I always find no one with whom to talk. Lately, I do not want to update my status on the Internet and feel a lack of interest in those of others. I choose to close my mind. I am afraid. I am scared to communicate with others.

October 25, 2014
Your English is remarkably good. I am sorry that you have had a hard time making friends and that you feel a lack of sincerity in your friendships. I have the same problem. I feel that life is often very hard and very cruel and people who feel deep emotions and who yearn for true, profound, devoted friendship are likely to get disappointed. Most friendship is really just like a business transaction. It feels very fake, doesn't it? It's saddening. I have corrected your entry, but you will see that there are only small changes. Overall, it's very good and you should be glad that you have such a wonderful ability to write in English.
October 25, 2014
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