君临‘
My breakfast Today is sunny day,I have breakfast for eight o 'clock.Today's breakfast is 嵌糕Wenling,it's my favorite food!Have noodles, celery, potatoes and carrots in the rice cake.
Oct 20, 2014 6:30 AM
Corrections · 6

My breakfast

Today is a sunny day.  [1] I have had [2] breakfast for at eight [3] o 'clock.  Today's breakfast is was 嵌糕Wenling,  it's my favorite food!Have It has noodles, celery, potatoes and carrots in the a rice cake.

 

----

[1] You have started a new topic, therefore you should start a new sentence.

[2] You had breakfast this morning, which requires using the past tense.

[3] Writing "eight o'clock" is actually the correct grammar, not "8 o'clock".  Well done!

 

----

I have corrected two of your Notebook entries, and each time it has made me feel hungry.  The photos you include show delicious-looking food!

October 20, 2014
Thank you very much!
October 20, 2014
I think it should be "at 8 o'clock", not "for eignht o'clock"
October 20, 2014
celery 为什么不用复数形式?,其他都用了,而且芹菜是个可数名词吧
October 20, 2014
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!