Luke M
Writng task - Introduction letter I was given the task by Chinese tutor to write a letter of 75-125 characters, with a quick self introduction I was wondering if you would look over it and give me some advice and corrections 谢谢 你好,我叫卢克,十七岁,是英国人,主在纽卡斯尔。我在学校学习汉语。汉语是我的最喜欢的课因为汉语越来越有意思。我想去亚州特别是中国因为我爱中国文话。 另外,我的爱好是看书,打乒乓球和游永。 我给你巴望说 在见 卢克
Oct 20, 2014 8:56 AM
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Writng task - Introduction letter

I was given the task by Chinese tutor to write a letter of 75-125 characters, with a quick self introduction
I was wondering if you would look over it and give me some advice and corrections
谢谢

你好,我叫卢克,十七岁,是英国人,(住 live)在纽卡斯尔。我在学校学习汉语。汉语是我的最喜欢的课,因为汉语越来越有意思 (因为我觉得学习汉语越来越有意思)。我想去亚州(亚洲)特别是中国因为我爱中国文话(文化
另外,我的爱好是看书,打乒乓球和游永(游泳)
我给你巴望说 --  May I know this sentence in English?
在见 (再见)
卢克

 

good job! :)

October 20, 2014

Writng task - Introduction letter

I was given the task by Chinese tutor to write a letter of 75-125 characters, with a quick self introduction
I was wondering if you would look over it and give me some advice and corrections
谢谢

你好,我叫卢克,十七岁,是英国人,在纽卡斯尔。我在学校学习汉语。汉语是我最喜欢的课因为汉语越来越很(越来越=more and more, it is not appropriate to use 越来越 here since it is in stable trend that Chinese as the language is interesting, it is not an increasing trend. you could use: more and more people are keen to learn Chinese 越来越多的人开始对中文感兴趣了) 有意思。我想去亚州特别是中国因为我(more natural) 中国文话文化
另外,我的爱好是看书,打乒乓球和游永游泳
我给你巴望说 (what's the meaning of this? i don't understand.)
在见 再见!
卢克

October 20, 2014

 


你好,我叫卢克,十七岁,是英国人,在纽卡斯尔。我在学校学习汉语。汉语是我的最喜欢的课之一。

我觉得汉语越来越有意思。我想去亚州特别是中国因为我爱中国文
另外,我的爱好是看书,打乒乓球和游
我给你巴望说 (what's this sentence mean? I dont understand.)
再见
卢克

October 20, 2014

Writng task - Introduction letter

I was given the task by Chinese tutor to write a letter of 75-125 characters, with a quick self introduction
I was wondering if you would look over it and give me some advice and corrections
谢谢

你好,我叫卢克,十七岁,是英国人,主在纽卡斯尔。我在学校学习汉语。汉语是我最喜欢的课,因为汉语越越有意思。我想去亚州特别是中国因为我爱中国文话。
另外,我的爱好是看书,打乒乓球和游
我给你巴望说(what does it mean?can you explain this in english?)
在见
卢克

October 20, 2014

Writng task - Introduction letter

I was given the task by Chinese tutor to write a letter of 75-125 characters, with a quick self introduction
I was wondering if you would look over it and give me some advice and corrections
谢谢

你好,我叫卢克,十七岁,是英国人,主在(住在)纽卡斯尔。我在学校学习汉语。汉语是我的最喜欢的课(,因为(学习)汉语越来越有意思。我想去亚州(,)特别是中国(,)因为我爱中国文话(文化。 
另外,我的爱好是看书,打乒乓球和游永。
我给你巴望说
在见(再见) 
卢克

October 20, 2014
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