Patrick Ruddy
二零十四年十月二十日 天天我要学习都日,可是我不可以了。我有三小时内图书馆了,可是我的朋友李她要帮助了,她买一个票飞机了,可是她不喜欢她的时候了。而且我是教室代表所以我有太很作天天。 Today I wanted to study all day,but i couldn't,I was in the library for 3 hours, but my friend needed help, she bought a plane ticket but wasn't happy with the dates on the ticket, also I am the class representative, so I had a lot to do as well.
Oct 20, 2014 4:29 PM
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二零十四年十月二十日

天天我要学习都日,可是我不可以了。我有三小时内图书馆了,可是我的朋友李她要帮助了,她买一个票飞机了,可是她不喜欢她的时候了。而且我是教室代表所以我有太很作天天。
Today I wanted to study all day,but i couldn't,I was in the library for 3 hours, but my friend needed help, she bought a plane ticket but wasn't happy with the dates on the ticket, also I am the class representative, so I had a lot to do as well.

Today I wanted to study all day,but i couldn't(本来我今天打算学习一整天的,但现在不行了)

I was in the library for 3 hours, but my friend needed help, she bought a plane ticket but wasn't happy with the dates on the ticket,(我已经在图书馆呆了三个小时了,但我的朋友需要我的帮助,她买了一张飞机票,但是对这张票上的日期不满意)

also I am the class representative, so I had a lot to do as well.(而且我是representative 所以我也要做些什么)

October 20, 2014
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二零十四年十月二十日

天我打算学习都日一天的,可是不可以了。我有三小时内图书馆了在图书馆学习了三个小时,可是我的朋友李她要帮助,她买一个票飞机了张飞机票,可是她不喜欢她的时候了满意票上的日期。而且我是教室代表班代所以我作天有太很天应该这么做
Today I wanted to study all day,but i couldn't,I was in the library for 3 hours, but my friend needed help, she bought a plane ticket but wasn't happy with the dates on the ticket, also I am the class representative, so I had a lot to do as well.

October 21, 2014
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Today I wanted to study all day,but i couldn't,I was in the library for 3 hours, but my friend needed help, she bought a plane ticket but wasn't happy with the dates on the ticket, also I am the class representative, so I had a lot to do as well.

今天我本想要学习一整天的,但是我不可以,我呆在图书馆三个小时,但是我的朋友需要帮助,她买了个飞机票但是她不喜欢机票的日期,因为我是班代表。所以我要帮她

October 21, 2014
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二零四年十月二十日

天天我要学习都日(今天我想一整天都学习),可是我不可以了。我有三小时内图书馆了(我在图书馆待了三个小时),可是我的朋友李她要帮助了(可是我的朋友需要帮助),她买一个票飞机了(她买了一张飞机票),可是她不喜欢她的时候了(可是她不喜欢出发的日期)。而且我是教室代表所以我有太很作天天。 (而且我是课室代表,所以我也有很多事情做
Today I wanted to study all day,but i couldn't,I was in the library for 3 hours, but my friend needed help, she bought a plane ticket but wasn't happy with the dates on the ticket, also I am the class representative, so I had a lot to do as well.

October 21, 2014
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