Andrey
My attempt at writing My daughter is 7 years old. As any father in the world I think my daughter has a lot of talents. Rest of us loves our children of course. For my opinion the best way to unlock creativity of our children is to get out of their hair. They know what do they really want. When we’ve come back at home from walk in the woods last time my daughter suddenly asked for gouache and paper. Apparently she was inspired by colorful autumn in the wood. After about 40 minutes she displayed us her small masterpiece. She called it «Autumn». For the case of good order I have decided to scan her painting to the end that she could see her painting in the future.
Oct 20, 2014 5:39 PM
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My attempt at writing

My daughter is 7 years old. As any father in the world I think my daughter has a lot of talents. The rest of us loves our own children, of course. In my opinion, the best way to unlock the creativity of our children is to get out of their hair. They know what do they really want.
The last time we’ve came back at home from walk in the woods last time my daughter suddenly asked for gouache and paper. Apparently she was inspired by the autumn colours in the woods. After about 40 minutes she showed us her small masterpiece. She called it «Autumn».
For the sake of good order I have decided to scan her painting so that she can see her painting in the future.

 

Good writing and a fabulous picture!

October 20, 2014
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