Marcelo León
My work today! Today was an exiting working date. As a brief introduction for you to now, I am a commercial guy, who is looking to close new deals in the telecommunication area, basically I am talking about the mobile world where I am work for. - that by the way I love it -. Well, as previously commented, today it was a successful and exiting day, I was able to close some deal with important customers. So the business are going good enough. On the other hand, previously I have had the necessity and inquietude to talk with my boss to ask for a position promotion, I feel myself confident to keep improving my carrier and with the possibility to escalate on a better position inside the company. Nevertheless when talking with my boss and explaining my interest he answer me that for his perception, he consider I need to improve on some issues including my communication in english, specially on my writing English. I was not consider myself as a native or even a good english writer but as far as I had tough, my English was not that bad. Nevertheless I took his comments as a constructive suggestion and I decided to improve it. So as result I am here trying to get support for the amazing community and taking advance of the many good people looking also to improve for some reason your not native idiom. So i will appreciate your english corrections and I am open to support if some want of you need help with his/her Spanish. Cheer and thank’s in advance for your time and help. Marcelo Leon
Oct 21, 2014 12:40 AM
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My work today!

Today was an exciting working date day at work.
As a brief introduction for you to now, I am a commercial(business, maybe?) guy, who is looking to close new deals in the telecommunication area field or the mobile world,. Basically, I am talking about the mobile world where I am work for. - that And by the way I love it. Well, as previously commented mentioned, today it was a successful and exciting day, as I was able to close some deals with important customers. So the business are going good enough is going well.

On the other hand, previously I have had felt the necessity and inquietude(this isn't a commonly used word - I had to google it! maybe use disquiet or rephrase sentence) to talk with my boss to ask for a position promotion. I feel myself confident to keep in improving my carrier career and with the possibility to escalate on a better position inside the company. Nevertheless when talking with my boss and explaining my interest he answered me that for by his perception, he consider thinks I need to improve on some issues including my communication in English, specifically on my writing in English. I was did not consider myself as a native or even a good English writer but as far as I had tough thought, my English was not that bad. Nevertheless I took his comments as a constructive suggestion and I decided to improve upon it. So as a result I am here trying to get support for the from this amazing community and taking advance of the many good people also looking also to improve for some reason your not native another idiom language.

So I will appreciate your English corrections and I am open to support if some want of you need help here to help if anyone wants help with his/her Spanish.
Cheers and thanks in advance for your time and help.

Marcelo Leon

October 21, 2014
Hello Kally, I really apreciate you help. thanks a lot!. Marcelo
October 21, 2014
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