Ji Hee
The conversation was with boss. Hi, Recently, My boss pretty often drop by store than before. As many as I have a lot of chance talking with him. Below sentences is that I had talking with my boss. Could you help me fix them?? Thanks. (1) My guess was wrong. I thought that one of this restaurant applier would be old. But In fact, it is not. Boss: Do you think he is old? I: Um, I know now, Actually I'm also surprised that he isn't old. The reason why I said he seems to be old is that his Korean expression and the word which he used in the e- mail were like old people saying. So I judged he would be not young. Boss: He is only 26. and According his resume, he came to University just at 2010.. How old person came to University at 2010? I: Okay.. I admit It's totally my misunderstanding. I am really sorry to make you confusing. Are you satisfying with this? (2) During I was washing a small dishes. It seemed that boss was finding something. I: what are you finding? Are you finding something? Boss: Yes, I am finding something to do. I'm not you. I: (-_-;;;) What does that mean? Boss: It is including everything... I: omg...;;;; (3) When I was trying to squeez the mop and the water in it out. Boss was approached me... Boss: Oh, You shouldn't do that, it would be flipped it over and spilled the dirty water. (the plastic box for washing the mop) I'll teach you. You have to lean this mop using your body weight. I: (You are teaching me everything..) Thanks for teaching me. --------After a while, when I was trying to mopping the floor, found that there were no more water in mop.---- I: Your weight is too heavy to remain the water in the mop(?) (4)About My English. Boss: Hey, Why don't you watch American drama not Korean drama. I: I'm always watching it. Boss: I means American drama. I: Yes, I am watching it. Boss: What do you watch? I: Breaking bad. Boss: Breaking bad is old. I: I don't think so. It's all new for me. and I don't matter it is old or not. It's fun enough to me. I am watching the season 2 recently. (5) I: Jenny said the scissors isn't supposed to put in the dish washer machine. Boss: I just want to sterilization. I: But If doing like you, the scissors is gonna be broken. Because the part of handle material is made plastic, when it is into the washer machine, It is gonna be melted(rusted, worned). Look, Its handle is already changed the colour. Now I am confusing now who's instruction do I follow. Boss: Okay, I will gonna ask Jenny. It's up to you.
Oct 21, 2014 5:29 AM
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*Note* I'm not correcting every single thing to make it sound like a native speaker.  I'm only pointing out the more important things you should focus on at your level. **

 

The conversation was with boss.

Hi, Recently, My boss pretty often drop by store than before.
As many as I have a lot of chance talking with him.
Below sentences is that I had talking with my boss.
Could you help me fix them?? Thanks.


(1)
My guess was wrong. I thought that one of this restaurant applicant would be old. But In fact, it he is not.

Boss: Do you think he is old?

I: Um, I know now, Actually I'm also surprised that he isn't old. The reason why I said he seems to be old is that his Korean expression and the word which he used in the e- mail were like old people saying. So I judged thought he would not be not young.

Boss: He is only 26. and According his resume, he came to University just at 2010.. How come an old person came to University at 2010?

I: Okay.. I admit It's totally my misunderstanding. I am really sorry to confuse make you confusing. Are you satisfied with this?


(2) During While I was washing a small dishes. It seemed that boss was finding looking for something. (찾다 = find, but "뭘 찾아요?" is "What are you looking for?".  Also 찾고 있다 = looking for / trying to find)

I: what are you finding? Are you finding something? <--- (Can you figure out how to fix the 'find' in these two sentences now?)

Boss: Yes, I am finding something to do. I'm not you. (This confuses me too)

I: (-_-;;;) What does that mean?

Boss: It is including everything...

I: omg...;;;;


(3) When I was trying to squeez the mop and the water in it out. Boss was approached me...

Boss: Oh, You shouldn't do that, it would be will flipped it over and spilled the dirty water. (the plastic box for washing the mop) I'll teach you. You have to lean on this the mop using your body weight.

I: (You are teaching me everything..) Thanks for teaching me.
--------After a while, when I was trying to mopping the floor, found that there were was no more water in mop.----

I: Your weight is too heavy to remain the leave any water in the mop(?)

(4)About My English.

Boss: Hey, Why don't you watch American drama not Korean drama.

I: I'm always watching it.

Boss: I means American drama.

I: Yes, I am watching it.

Boss: What do you watch?

I: Breaking bad.

Boss: Breaking bad is old.

I: I don't think so. It's all new for me. and I don't matter care if it is old or not. It's fun enough to me.
I am watching the season 2 recently.

(Two ways to fix this sentence "I have been watching season 2 recently." or "I am watching season 2 now."

(5)

I: Jenny said the scissors isn't supposed to put in the dish washer machine.

Boss: I just want to sterilization sterilize it.

I: But If doing like you that, the scissors is are gonna be broken. Because the part of handle material is made of plastic,
when it is into the washer machine, It is gonna be melted(rusted, worned). Look, Its handle is already changed the colour. Now I am confusinged now who's instruction do I follow.

Boss: Okay, I will gonna ask Jenny. It's up to you.

 

Good job on working hard and posting a lot of notebook entries.  Keep it up ^_^

October 21, 2014
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The conversation was with boss.
Hi, Recently, My boss pretty often drop by store than before.
As many as I have a lot of chance talking with him.
Below sentences is that I had talking with my boss.
Could you help me fix them?? Thanks.

(1)
My guess was wrong. I thought that one of this restaurant applier would be old. But In fact, it is not. I guess I was wrong. I thought that one of the applicants (for the restaurant) would be old. But he isn’t (= in fact, he wasn’t).

Boss: Do you think he is old?

I: Um, I know now, Actually I'm also surprised that he isn't old. The reason why I said he seems to be old is that his Korean expression and the word which he used in the e- mail were like old people saying. So I judged he would be not young. Um, I know now. Actually, I’m also surprised that he isn’t that old. The reason I said what I did is because, the way he expresses himself in Korean, comes across as if he is older. (or…The way he expresses himself in Korean is similar to what older Koreans say). So I judged that he wasn’t young.

Boss: He is only 26. and According his resume, he came to University just at 2010.. How old person came to University at 2010? He is only 26 and according to his resume, he only started university in 2010…How can he be old if he only started in 2010?

I: Okay.. I admit It's totally my misunderstanding. I am really sorry to make you confusing. Are you satisfying with this? Okay… I admit I’m totally at fault, it is my misunderstanding. I am really sorry that I confused you. Are you satisfied?

(2) During I was washing a small dishes. It seemed that boss was finding (looking for) something.

I: what are you finding? Are you finding something? What are you looking for? Are you looking for something?

Boss: Yes, I am finding something to do. I'm not you. Yes, I’m finding something to do. I’m not you!

I: (-_-;;;) What does that mean?

Boss: It is including everything... It includes everything…

I: omg...;;;;

(3) When I was trying to squeez the mop and the water in it out. Boss was approached me... When I was trying to squeeze the water out of the mop, my boss approached me…

Boss: Oh, You shouldn't do that, it would be flipped it over and spilled the dirty water. (the plastic box for washing the mop) I'll teach you. You have to lean this mop using your body weight. Oh, you shouldn’t do it like that, it will flip over and spill the dirty water. I’ll teach you (or.. I will show you). You have to lean on the mop and use your body weight.

I: (You are teaching me everything..) Thanks for teaching me.
--------After a while, when I was trying to mopping the floor, found that there were no more water in mop.---- After a while when I was trying to mop, I found that there was no more water in the bucket.

I: Your weight is too heavy to remain the water in the mop(?) *** Am I too heavy to keep the water in the bucket?

(4)About My English.

Boss: Hey, Why don't you watch American drama not Korean drama?

I: I'm always watching it. I’m always watching it.

Boss: I means American drama. I mean American drama.

I: Yes, I am watching it.

Boss: What do you watch?

I: Breaking bad.

Boss: Breaking bad is old.

I: I don't think so. It's all new for me. and I don't matter it is old or not. It's fun enough to me.
I am watching the season 2 recently. I don’t think so. It’s all new to me and It doesn’t matter whether it’s old or not. It’s enough fun for me (or… Its fun no matter what). I’m currently watching Season 2.

(5)

I: Jenny said the scissors isn't supposed to put in the dish washer machine. Jenny said that the scissors aren’t supposed to be put in the dishwasher.

Boss: I just want to sterilization. I just want to sterilize it.

I: But If doing like you, the scissors is gonna be broken. Because the part of handle material is made plastic,
when it is into the washer machine, It is gonna be melted(rusted, worned). Look, Its handle is already changed the colour. Now I am confusing now who's instruction do I follow. But if you do that, the scissors are going to end up broken (or…The scissors are going to break), because part of the material is made of plastic. When you put in the dishwasher, it is gonna melt. Look! Its handle has already changed color (or…discolored). Now I’m confused who’s instruction I am meant to follow?

Boss: Okay, I will gonna ask Jenny. It's up to you. Okay, I’m gonna ask jenny. It’s up to you.


첮번째: Your boss, sounds like a loser! 조심합시요. 
두번째: your expression is good, but you just say things in the wrong order. BUT, your English is really good, if you can say all this.

Good Luck, with your further studies. Any questions just ask. :)

October 21, 2014
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