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The important of Punctual Nowadays ,a massive amount of people have a heat debate on the importance of being punctual .From my perspective,I think,being punctual is of great significance in our daily life. Two reasons can be listed as follows:to the beginning,everything depends on you attitude.Being punctual ,you can be a good student in teachers’ eyes.what’s more you can grab some important imformation in time.second,being punctual can improve your relationship with your friends,your colleague.Because most people like to make friends with people who show respect on time like you.In addition,you can make a strong impression on others when you have a party or importat occasion Consequently,being punctual attachs great significane to your life.If we can be punctual person ,I firmly believe that it can bring a brilliant future to us .Moreover,you will have more opportunity for yourself to catch what you are in desperate
Oct 21, 2014 3:14 PM
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thank you.it is useful,
November 1, 2014

The Importance of Being Punctual

 

Nowadays, a massive amount of a large number of people have a heated debate on the importance of being punctual. (The sentence is grammatically correct, yet it would be better to say, 'Nowadays, people have different views about being punctual.) From my perspective, I think, being punctual is of great significance in our daily life.

 

Why is it so? Two reasons can be listed as follows. In the beginning, (In the first place/firstly) everything depends on your attitude. Being punctual, you can be a good student in teachers’ eyes. What’s more? You can grab some important imformation in because of being on time. Secondly, being punctual can improve your relationship with your friends and your colleagues. Because, most people like to make friends with the people who show respect on time like you. ('Because, most people like to make friends with the people who know the value of time like you' would be better.) In addition, you can make a strong impression on others when you have a party or important occasion by being on time.

 

Consequently, being punctual attaches/imparts great significance to your life. If we can be punctual person, I firmly believe that it can bring a brilliant future to us. Moreover, you will have more opportunity opportunities for yourself to catch grab what when you are in desperate situation.

October 24, 2014
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