trip plan We will go to great smoky mountain with our friends this week. We will spend 4 days there. I tried to book a cabin there, but it's too late, every cabin is unavilable. What a pity!

wendy

Oct 21, 2014 4:53 PM

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I’m not sure if you intended the plural present participle "we," or, if you are referring to you and your friends. I have written the paragraph in two different forms for you. Also I recommend clarifying whether or not the trip was cancelled due to the lack of cabin availability. I have removed "What a pity!", it is not as common in current English as "what a shame" (which are both improper usage of the terms), instead adding "Unfortunately"

Plural = We = me + family or similar

Singular = I (self)

Trip Plan (Plural beginning)

We are going to the Great Smokey Mountains with our friends this week. We will be spending 4 days there, unfortunately when I tried to book a cabin they were all unavailable.

Trip Plan (Singular beginning)

I am going to the Great Smokey Mountains with my friends this week. We will be spending 4 days there, unfortunately when I tried to book a cabin they were all unavailable.

October 21, 2014

Trip Plans

We are will going to the Great Smoky Mountain with our friends this week. We will spend 4 days there. I tried to book a cabin there, but it's was too late, every cabin is booked unavilable. What a pity!