Ling
it‘s a nice day it's my first day there. May there will be many surprises in the coming future.As a TCSL teacher, i'm interested in talking with people from all over the world and knowing different culture. If u want to practice Chinese or learn Chinese, i think we can be good partners.
Oct 22, 2014 8:02 AM
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iIts a nice day

iIt's my first day there here. May there will be many surprises [1] in the coming future.  As a TCSL teacher, iI'm interested in talking with people from all over the world and knowing different cultures. If u you want to practice Chinese or learn Chinese,  i  I  think we can be good partners.

 

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[1] A surprise is not always good.  Any of the following may be closer to your meaning:

"May there be many pleasant surprises in the future."

"May there be enjoyable times in the future."

"May there be enjoyment in the future."

"May there be fun in the future."

 

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Welcome to Italki, Ling.  I recommend that you read the following article.  It was written by Andi, an English teacher here on Italki.  It covers a few mistakes that you have made in your writing.

http://www.italki.com/article/279/five-ways-to-improve-your-english-writing#.VEd-KfmUd8F

October 22, 2014
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