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for ielts test !~please correct it~ topic: Some people think that advertising only promotes the sales of products but has no effect in improving their quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree? As a way of promoting sales of goods, advertising appears all over the corner of the modern world,but a sort of people think it useless for up the quality of products.in my opinion, advertising not only good for the sales ,but also useful for increasing the quality. Production truely depends on the advertising nowadays.A excellent advertisement can let the huge range users to know that there is new product will be launched.and a good advertisement also is a art products,it use the bright colors or special ideas to show the characters of the new things.the perfect example is the APPLE corporation,when it hold the launch event ,hundreds of million people were waiting in front of internet to watch the new devices,then waiting for buying them . On the other aspect , advertisement improve the quality inobviously ,people could know the new feature and function through the advertising,hence the engineers of company have to enhance their way of production and continue launch different kinds of new products ,what ‘s more ,users also could compare the new one with the old devices though the advertisement,after that , they can give some recommends for the company to help them developing a modification of this series products. In conclusion, i recognize that the advertising is also a good way to accelerate the development of quality of different sort of products,except for promoting the sales.each company could find treasure from the advertising,hence making a great improvement in the future.
Oct 22, 2014 3:47 PM
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for ielts test !~please correct it~

topic:
Some people think that advertising only promotes the sales of products but has no effect in improving their quality. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As a way of promoting sales of goods, advertising appears in every all over the corner of the modern world,but a sort of some people think it's useless in improving for up the quality of products. In my opinion, advertising is not only good for the sales,but also useful for increasing the quality.
Production truely depends on the advertising nowadays. An excellent advertisement can let the informs a large audience huge range users to know that there is a new product will be launched. and A good advertisement is also  artistic is a art products,it uses the bright colors or special ideas to show introduce the elements/characteristics characters of the new products things. The perfect example is the APPLE Corporation,when it holds a the launch event,hundreds of millions of people are were waiting on front of the Internet to watch view the new devices, then queueing waiting to buy for buying them .
On the other hand  aspect , advertisements can subtly improve the quality. inobviouslyConsumers are aware of people could know the new features and functions through the advertising,hence the engineers of the company have to enhance their way of production  strategies and continue to  launch different kinds of new products.What ‘s more ,users can also could compare the newer models ones with the old devices through the advertisement,and after that , they can give some recommendations for to the company to help them in developing a modification of this series of products.
In conclusion, I recognise that the advertising is also a good way to accelerate the development of quality of different sorts of products,except as well as for promoting the sales. Each company could find benefits treasure from the advertising, hence making a great improvement in the future.

October 22, 2014
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