"An Unforgettable Event in My Life"

In my memory, there forever exists a picture. It is an old grandpa, in the thick snow, riding a Yongjiu sign bicycle. He is wearing thick clothes, carefully walking.
This old man is my grandfather. At that moment, I was in junior high school. Because I do not have the cost of living I could not afford where I was living so I called my Grandfather. Grandfather brought me cost of living paid for where I was living. He put the cost of living to me. I looked at his white hair and I endure the tears did not cry. And He told gave me something to let me study hard. When I look at my grandfather riding his bike slowly, gradually become a small point and I burst into tears. At the moment, I said to myself, I will make a great effort.
This picture is forever fixed in my mind. This is an unforgettable event in my life.

This is very good! I know the idea of the story even when I corrected it! Keep up the great work!

这是很不错的！我知道这个故事的想法，甚至在我纠正了！跟上伟大的工作！