Matt
a trip I prefer to take pictures and keep a journal on a trip. The main reason is that it can keep the memory forever. Snapping a keepsake photograph or keeping a journal can remain you of what happened on this trip, whom you went with and how you felt about this trip. It’s quite amazing to find this information especially when some pieces of this trip are no longer completed in your mind. In addition, if I post my pictures on my personal homepage, all my fans would share my trip online. Thus, they have more chances to make comments on your page and interact with you. Maybe you would gain more fans if your pictures are funny enough. So I have every reason to do that.
Oct 23, 2014 2:45 PM
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a trip

I prefer /<em>like - prefer is for comparing two things</em>/ to take pictures and keep a journal on a trip.
The main reason is that it /<em>I - :-) or if 'it' means taking pictures and keeping a journal ok, but it sounds a little odd</em>/  can keep the memory forever. Snapping a keepsake /<em>ok, I think keepsake is usually an object rather than a photo, but it's clear what you mean, maybe souvenir fits better</em> / photograph or keeping a journal can remain /<em>remind</em>/ you of what happened on this trip, whom you went with /<em>perfectly correct, but common usage is who you went with, it's up to you</em> / and how you felt about this trip. It’s quite amazing /later/ to find this information especially when some pieces / <em>again correct, but parts or bits sounds more usual</em>/ of this trip are no longer completed /<em>I would omit completed</em>/  in your mind. / especially when you have forgotten what happened during your trip./
In addition, if I post my pictures on my personal homepage, all my fans would /or can or could/ share my trip online. Thus, they have more chances to make comments on your /my/ page and interact with you /me/. Maybe you /I/ would gain more fans if your /my/ pictures are /were - subjunctive verb/ funny enough. (you could use my or your here but you need to be consistent, not switch between them)
So I have every reason to do that.

 

best wishes

October 23, 2014
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