Fae Fuerst
Chinese Intro: 我叫福佩芝。 我是美国人。我十九岁。 我的生日是十一月三十号。 我是大学生。我学习汉语和日语。 很高兴认识你~
Oct 24, 2014 1:27 AM
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Ur chinese is good, but I revised as below to be more natural.

(you could also correct my below english comments, ha)

 

Chinese Intro:

我叫福佩芝。
我是美国人十九岁。

It is noticed that many beginners tend to make each sentence as one Sentence with a full stop, virtually it could be a clause which we use comma to seperate.

 

我的生日是十一月三十号。
我是大学生学习汉语和日语。

In case two clauses have the same subject, typically we could omit the second one.


很高兴认识你~

October 24, 2014

Chinese Intro:

我叫福佩芝。
我是美国人。十九岁。
我的生日是十一月三十号。
我是大学生。学习汉语和日语。
很高兴认识你~
June 15, 2017
为什么14年的作文都能被翻出来?
June 15, 2017
Mike有没有点儿隐私意识
June 15, 2017
i am mike, i would like to teach you chinese, make friends with you. we can talk in english.i want to impove my english. now i am working at dubai. i hope we can be real friend. my mobile number:00971561436521 QQ:314739034 Wechat:JINCHAO523 skype:mike523126
December 30, 2015
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