Marie-Noëlle
A sing When I tell you to come, don't ask yourself questions, there is a reason for everything that I don't know how to explain it to you. For three years my soul is getting empty Do you know what is having the heart destroyed by life? the heart destroyed by life? I know you couldn't stay, it was time to say goodbye. If one day, they told me that you would leave this world, I would have done everything I could to save you. But it was too late. You do not need to talk me I know what you're gonna tell me That you love me and you do not have to worry Because the life is beautiful. Don't go, stay with those who love you I need you for correct me please :)
Oct 24, 2014 4:22 PM
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A sing song   

When I tell you to come,
don't ask yourself questions,
there is a reason for everything that
I don't know how to explain it to you.
For three years my soul is has been getting emptyier 
Do you know what is how it feels having the your heart destroyed by life?
the your heart destroyed by life?

I know you couldn't stay, it was time to say goodbye.
If one day, they told me that you would leave this world,
I would have done do [If you're talking in present tense] everything I could to save you.
But it was too late.
You do not need to talk to me
I know what you're gonna tell me
That you love me and you do not have to worry
Because the life is beautiful.


Don't go, stay with those who love you. 



I need you for to correct this for me please :)

October 24, 2014
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A sing song

When I tell you to come,
don't ask yourself questions,
there is a reason for everything that
I don't know how to explain it to you.
For three years my soul is getting empty
Do you know what is having the heart destroyed by life?
the heart destroyed by life?

I know you couldn't stay, it was time to say goodbye.
If one day, they told me that you would leave this world,
I would have done everything I could to save you.
But it was too late.
You do not need to talk to me
I know what you're gonna tell me
That you love me and you do not have to worry
Because the life is beautiful.


Don't go, stay with those who love you



Beautiful words Marie

October 24, 2014
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