Jonnatan
If you have a motorcycle you are carrying your coffin In my city the traffic is too hard so a lot of people have bought a motorcycle. Many people buy a motorcycle because the price of this one is cheaper than a car but others buy one because they can go between the cars so they waste less time. When you are traveling in a car you can see motorcyclists of each side of the road and they are the first in running if the semaphore have changed to green. Really the motorcyclists don't take care of themselves and many car drivers are imprudent too. Almost all days there is an accident with a motorcycle and many times the motorcyclists have died. Four years ago I bought a motorcycle and three months later I sold it, anyway I had a little accident, I had luck because it wasn't so hard. As many people die due of the motorcycles is very common to hear phrases like what I wrote on the title of this entry.
Oct 25, 2014 4:24 AM
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     Many motorcycle accidents are fatal, so phrases loke the title of this entry are commonly heard. There is a lot of traffic in my city, so many people have purchased motorcycles. They buy motorcycles because they are less expensive than cars, and because they can ride inbetween cars to save time.  Motorcyclists ride on both sides of the road and they pass the cars that are waiting at intersections when the red lights turn green. Motorcyclists don't seem to care about safety, and many automobiles are driven dangerously too. There are accidents involving motorcycles almost daily, and many result in fatalitiesI bought a motorcycle four years ago, but I sold it after just three months because I was in an accident. Luckily, no one was injured. 

<em>Bueno. Cambié algunas phrases de su narrativo por usted como mostrar otras posibilidades. Saludos. </em>

October 25, 2014

If you have a motorcycle, you are carrying your coffin

 

In my city the traffic is really bad so a lot of people have bought <em>a</em> motorcycles. Many people buy <em>a</em> motorcycles because they are cheaper than a car but others buy them because they can go between the cars so they waste less time. When you are traveling in a car, you will see motorcyclists on each side of the lane and they are the first moving if the stop light changes to green. Really, the motorcyclists don't drive safely and many car drivers are unsafe too. Almost everyday there is an accident with a motorcycle and many times the motorcyclists have died. Four years ago I bought a motorcycle and three months later I sold it, because I had a little accident.  I was lucky because it wasn't very bad. As many people die from riding motorcycles, it is very common to hear phrases like what I wrote for the title of this entry.

October 25, 2014

If you have a motorcycle you are carrying your coffin

In my city the traffic is too hard very busy so a lot of people have bought a motorcycles. Many people buy a motorcycle because the price of this one is cheaper than a car. but Another reason others buy one is because they can go between the cars so they waste less time. When you are traveling in a car you can see motorcyclists of on each side of the road, and they are the first in running if the semaphore traffic lights have changed to green. Really the motorcyclists don't take care of themselves, and many car drivers are imprudent too. Almost all days there is an accident with a motorcycle, and many times the motorcyclists have died. Four years ago I bought a motorcycle and three months later I sold it. anyway I had a little accident, I had luck because it wasn't so hard. As many people die due of  to the motorcycles it is very common to hear phrases like what I wrote on for the title of this entry.

 

-- "too hard" can mean "difficult", but in this sentence "busy" made more sense.

-- Make "motorcycle" plural because "a lot of people" are buying them. 

-- I am not sure what "semaphore" means. Maybe "traffic light"?

-- I added in a few commas to break up the long sentences into shorter pieces. 

 

This is a really interesting post. I feel as though I know more about your country now. Very well written. I could understand what you were trying to say the entire time I was reading it.

October 25, 2014

If you have a motorcycle you are carrying your coffin (bueno titulo)

In my city the traffic is too hard bad so a lot of people have bought a motorcycle. Many people buy a motorcycle because the price of this one it is cheaper than buying a car but others buy one because so they can go in between the cars so they waste less save time. When you are traveling in a car you can see motorcyclists of on each side of the road and they are the first in running to go if the semaphore stoplight have changed to turns green. Really the motorcyclists don't take care of themselves and many car drivers are imprudent too. Almost all days every day there is a motorcycle accident with a motorcycle and many times the motorcyclists have died. Four years ago, I bought a motorcycle and three months later, I sold it.  anyway I had a little accident, but I had luck was lucky because it wasn't so hardbad . As Since many people die due of the motorcycles from motorcycle injuries, is very common to hear phrases like what I wrote on the title of this entry. people often say that you are carrying your coffin if you have a motorcycle.



Buen post. Esta es tema importante. Quisas usted va a salvar algunas vidas!

October 25, 2014
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