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Oct 25, 1881 - Pablo Picasso born Pablo Picasso, one of the greatest and most influential artists of the 20th century, is born in Malaga, Spain. Picasso's father was a professor of drawing, and he bred his son for a career in academic art. Picasso had his first exhibit at age 13 and later quit art school so he could experiment full-time with modern art styles. He went to Paris for the first time in 1900, and in 1901 was given an exhibition at a gallery on Paris' rue Lafitte, a street known for its prestigious art galleries. The precocious 19-year-old Spaniard was at the time a relative unknown outside Barcelona, but he had already produced hundreds of paintings. Winning favorable reviews, he stayed in Paris for the rest of the year and later returned to the city to settle permanently.
Oct 26, 2014 2:02 AM
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     Pablo Picasso; one of the most influential artists of the<em> twentieth</em> century, <em>was</em> born in Malaga, Spain <em>on 25 October, 1881. </em>Picasso's father was a professor of drawing, and he <em>mentored</em> his son for a career in academic art. <em>Picasso's</em> first exhibit <em>was </em>at <em>the</em> age <em>of thirteen. He</em> quit art school <em>because he wanted to</em> experiment with modern art styles. He <em>moved</em> to Paris in 1900, and in 1901 <em>he gave</em> an exhibition at <em>one of</em> Paris'<em> prestigious Rue Lafitte galleries</em>.
     The precocious <em>nineteen year-old</em> Spaniard was a relative unknown outside Barcelona <em>at the time</em>, but had already produced hundreds of paintings. Winning favorable reviews, he <em>remained</em> in Paris for the rest of the year. <em>Picasso</em> later returned to the city <em>and</em> settled permanently. 

October 26, 2014
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Oct 25, 1881 - Pablo Picasso born

Pablo Picasso, one of the greatest and most influential artists of the 20th century, is was born in Malaga, Spain.

Picasso's father was a professor of drawing, and he bred (groomed) his son for a career in academic art. Picasso had his first exhibit at age 13 and later quit art school so he could experiment full-time with modern art styles. He went to Paris for the first time in 1900, and in 1901 was given an exhibition at a gallery on Paris' rue Lafitte, a street known for its prestigious art galleries. The precocious 19-year-old Spaniard was at the time a relative unknown outside Barcelona, but he had already produced hundreds of paintings. Winning favorable reviews, he stayed in Paris for the rest of the year and later returned to the city to settle permanently.

 

I offer a better word than 'bred'. The word bred would be more appropriate for beeding livestock for sale or slaughter. The word groomed has a much more nurturing meaning in this context. Overall this was very good. Well done.

October 26, 2014
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October 26, 2014
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