2014 Hot Sell Personal Track Wallet Alarm With Bluetooth Self-Timer Remote
Rather than "Hot Sell", you can say "Our Best-Selling Item." The reason is that if a shopper thinks that thousands of other people have bought this item, it's probably good enough for that shopper, too.
Is "Personal Track Wallet Alarm" that actual name of the product? If not, you could find a shorter name. The word "Personal" does not provide any information. The word "Wallet" is restrictive, because it suggests you can't use the device with a handbag or with car keys. The word "Track" is worrying—people don't want to be tracked. Because the main benefit of the product is a guard against losing an item, you might call it an "Anti-Loss Alarm", or "Never-Lose-Me Alarm", or "Remember-Me Alarm".
Perhaps you can use a title and a product statement:
"Never-Lose-Me Alarm" — Best-Selling Item
With this remote-control Bluetooth alarm, you will never again lose your phone, wallet, handbag, or car keys.
Product Description:
The Track Wallet Alarm is designed for personal to self-portrait and anti-theft / lost.
The phrase "personal to self-portrait" has no meaning. It would be better to say something like, "Take better selfies by remote-control of your phone's camera."
However, because the main purpose of the product is its guard against losing a device, your first lines should explain how this is done. For example:
Attach the Never-Lose-Me Alarm to anything that you never want to lose. Pair the Alarm to your smart phone using Bluetooth. Now, both devices will sound an alarm if they move too far away from each other.
At this point, you have already described why someone would want to buy the product, and how the product works. A potential customer may think, "Okay, that sounds like a good idea." Now that the customer is interested, you can list all the additional benefits of the device, to convince the customer to make the purchase.
It would take me too long to go through the remainer of the advertisement. I hope the above suggestions help you a little.
