My Day

Today is Thursday, tomorrow is the weekend and I can finally can go home and have a good rest.。On Saturday someone friends and I will play football，then have dinner ，and chat in everying about things together. They are my best friends, and every time I meet see them they're all very happy, so。I can‘t wait! Writing a composition in English is very difficult for me.。Come on. 

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"Today is Thursday, and tomorrow is the weekend. Finally I can go home and rest. On Saturday some friends and I will play football and then have dinner, chatting about everything together. They are my best friends. Every time we meet we are all very happy - I can't wait! Writing a composition in English is very difficult for me. "