Francy
Movies Are So Cool! Movies are absolutely fantastic to me, watching a movie is one of my favorite ways to chill out. The kinds of films that I really enjoy are adventure, action, comedia (romantic comedia, sometimes) and science fiction. Horror/Terror movies are sucks for my person. Few minutes ago, I was watching the movie "Her". It was pretty interesting. It talked about a romance between a man and an OS (Operational System), a sort of insane LOL, but it made me cry and to reflect about our relationships. I mean, with all that high technology what we have nowadays, people maybe are getting away from each without to notice. They are staying dependents from an "unreal world" more and more. I'm not sure if some time anyone will be falling in love with an OS like in this film (I hope not ), but I'm sure people are living their lives in a digital world every single minute. They can't do anything and not posting on Facebook, Instagram or whatever. Well, in the end, the OS called Samantha left the guy and of course, they broke up. Sad no? totally sad! Plz, help me and correct my text!
Oct 31, 2014 2:20 AM
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Movies Are So Cool!

Movies are absolutely fantastic to me<em>.</em> <em>W</em>atching a movie is one of my favorite ways to chill out. The kinds of films that I really enjoy are adventure, action, comedia <em>comedy </em>(romantic comedia <em>comedy</em>, sometimes) and science fiction. Horror/Terror movies are sucks for my person <em>suck in my opinion</em>. <em>A few </em>Few minutes ago, I was watching the movie "Her". It was pretty interesting. It talked about a romance between a man and an OS (Operational System), a sort of insane <em>one</em> LOL, but it made me cry and to reflect about <em>reflect on </em>our relationships. I mean, with all that <em>the </em>high technology what <em>that </em>we have nowadays, people maybe are getting away from each without to notice <em>might be distancing themselves from each other without realizing it</em>. They are staying dependents from an "unreal world" more and more <em>becoming more and more dependent on an "unreal world"</em>. I'm not sure if some time anyone will be falling in love <em>if someone will be falling in love </em>with an OS <em>any time soon </em>like in this film (I hope not ), but I'm sure people are living their lives in a digital world every single minute. They can't do anything and not <em>without </em>posting on Facebook, Instagram or whatever. Well, in the end, the OS called Samantha left the guy and of course, they broke up. Sad no? <em>Sad, isn't it? T</em>otally sad!


Plz, help me and correct my text!

 

<em>Great job! I was impressed with the amount of idiomatic English expressions you used in your writing. All these movies are making you sound like a native!</em>

October 31, 2014

Movies Are So Cool!

Movies are absolutely fantastic to me, watching a movie is one of my favorite ways to chill out. The kinds of films that I really enjoy are adventure, action, comedia (romantic comedia, sometimes) and science fiction. Horror/Terror movies are sucks for my person. Few minutes ago, I was watching the movie "Her". It was pretty interesting. It talked about a romance between a man and an OS (Operational <em>Operating </em>System), a sort of insane <em>one, </em>LOL, but it made me cry and to reflect about our relationships. I mean, with all that high technology what we have nowadays, people maybe are getting away from each without to notice. They are staying dependents from an "unreal world" more and more. I'm not sure if some time anyone will be falling in love with an OS like in this film (I hope not ), but I'm sure people are living their lives in a digital world every single minute. They can't do anything and not posting on Facebook, Instagram or whatever. Well, in the end, the OS<em>,</em> called Samantha, left the guy and of course, they broke up. Sad no? totally sad!


Plz help me and correct my text!

 

I agree with Adrian.  He made most of the corrections, but I saw a couple others you could work on.  And you type just like a real American!  Congratulations.

November 1, 2014

Movies Are So Cool!

I love movies, are absolutely fantastic to me, watching a movie is one of my favorite ways to chill out. The kinds of films that I really enjoy are adventure, action, comedy (romantic comedy, sometimes) and science fiction. Horror/Terror Thriller movies are sucks as far as I am concerned.for my person. A few minutes ago, I was watching the movie "Her". It was pretty interesting. It talked was about a romance between a man and an OS (Operational System), a sort of insane LOL??, but it made me cry and to reflect about our relationships. I mean, with all that the high technology what we have nowadays, people maybe are drifting  getting away from each without to noticing. They are staying becoming increasingly dependents from on an "unreal world." more and more. I'm not sure if some time anyone will be falling in love with an OS like in this film (I hope not ), but I'm sure people are constantly living their lives in a digital world. every single minute. They can't do anything without and not posting on Facebook, Instagram or whatever. Well, in the end, the OS called Samantha left the guy and of course, they broke up. Sad no? Totally sad!


Plz, Please, help me and correct my text!

November 1, 2014
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