Jerry
Today is Halloween!Happy holidays! The time is running quickly, the year will be arriving in 2015 at once! The sugars is my younger sister most likes, But eats the sugar will be not good for teeth, so I don't support her to eat the sugar in normal times. However, I will buy a case of sugar for my younger sister at the moment, because today is Halloween. I think that she will be very happy certainly today!
Oct 31, 2014 4:11 AM
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Today is Halloween! Happy holidays!

 

The time is running quickly, the year 2015 will be arriving in 2015 at once soon!

The sugars is what my younger sister most likes, Bbut eatsing the sugar will be not good for her teeth, so I don't support her to eating the sugar in normal times. However, I will buy a case of sugar candy for my younger sister at the moment, because today is Halloween. I think that she will certainly be very happy certainly today!

 

 

October 31, 2014
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