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Wake up!! Definitely I'm not a morning person. It's very hard for me wake up early then when alarm's phone start honking my suffering get started. I turn off the alarm, sit down on my bed and I ask: can I sleep more 5 minutes? Generally, the answer is: No, you can't so there's nothing I can do, I stand up and walk until the bedroom's door with closed eyes and when I open the bathroom's door it's over. The sun is shinning in front of the bathroom's window and the clarity let me know that I'm obliged to open my eyes and wash my face.
Oct 31, 2014 4:03 PM
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Wake up!!

I'm definitely not a morning person.

It's very hard for me wake up early, so when my alarm's phone start honking goes off, my suffering get started commences.

An alarm <em>goes off</em>, <em>sounds</em> or <em>wails</em>. Geese and klaxons honk.

I turn off the alarm, sit down on my upright in bed and I ask myself, "Can I sleep more 5 minutes?"

It's not clear whether or not you got out of bed to turn off the alarm. This would change how you sit on/in your bed.

Generally, the answer is "No, you can't", so there's nothing I can do, I but stand up and walk toward the bedroom's door with my eyes closed, and when I open the bathroom's door it's all over. The sun is shining in front of through the bathroom's window and its clarity lets me know tells me that I'm obligated to open my eyes and wash my face.

Be aware of how quotations in English are punctuated. Using a colon (<em>:</em>) is not typical at all.

<em>Bedroom door</em> and <em>bathroom window</em> are compond nouns. We don't use possessives here.

There were a couple of mistakes with prepositions, and some phrases were a little awkward so I gave a better suggestion.

Yes, there is a difference between <em>oblige</em> and <em>obligate</em>, and <em>obligate</em> is the word you need.


Apart from that, it's an entertaining little essay. :)

November 2, 2014
can you learn me how to talk portuguese ,please ?
October 31, 2014
That's nice. Oh ya, it's obligated instead of obliged. But overall is good
October 31, 2014
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