Ryan
My day Toh is subah ko main apni gaari main chalane wala tha lekin phir gaari shuru nahi ho rahi, toh mujhe laga k "kya huwa apni gaari main?" toh uske baad maine apne abu ko phone kiya aur use bataya aur usne kaha k shayad apka battery kharab ho gya kyonke tumne kuch dinon ke liye apni gaari istamal nahi kiya, toh uske baad maine apne dada ko phone kiya aur use bataya agar wo mujhe ek dukan lay jaa sekty hain naya battery khareedne ke liye. aur usne theek kaha toh phir hum dukan jaty hain naya battery khareedty hain aur phir ghar wapis jaaty hain. jab hum ghar par pohonch chuky hain humne gaari ko naya battery lagayay aur phir hum gaari shuru karty hain aur gaari kam ho rahi thi koi masala nahi hai, toh mujhe laga k main apni gaari main taiz drive karne ke liye jaunga takay main gaari ki kaarkardagi check kar sakoon. 2 minutes k baad gaari dobara band ho gayi toh pata nahi meri gaari ke masla kya hai I know this is urdu based but I think the hindi section is more active so i posted it here as well :)
Nov 10, 2014 4:16 PM
Corrections · 2

My day

Aaj subah me apni Gaadi chalane wala tha lekin, Gaadi shuru nahi ho rahi thi toh mujhe laga k "kya huwa meri Gaadi main/ko?"
Fir uske baad maine apne abu ko phone kiya aur unhe bataya/kaha to unhone kaha/bataya k shayad apki Gaadi ki battery kharab ho gyi hai, kyonke tumne/aapne kuch dinon se apni Gaadi istamal nahi ki hai,
toh uske baad maine apne dada ko phone kiya aur unhe bataya agar wo mujhe ek dukan lay jaa sekty hain, naya battery khareedne ke liye. aur unhone theek kaha toh phir hum dukan jate hai aur ek nayi battery khareedty hain
aur phir ghar wapis aate hain. jab hum ghar par pohonch chuky hain humne Gaadi me nayi battery lagayi aur phir hum Gaadi shuru kari/karte hain aur
Gaadi kaam kar rahi thi to koi masla nahi tha, toh mujhe laga k me apni Gaadi, taiz drive karne ke liye jaunga, takay main Gaadi ki kaarkardagi check kar sakoon.
do minutes k baad Gaadi dobara band ho jaati hai, toh pata nahi ab meri Gaadi ka kya masla .

me= I
mein= into/inside

"i have corrected it"
your text is mixture of Hindi and Urdu,
I would say "nice texting"
keep it up , you are good at it.
only some sentence framing mistakes wer there else it is better.
best of luck :)

November 10, 2014
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