My day
Aaj subah me apni Gaadi chalane wala tha lekin, Gaadi shuru nahi ho rahi thi toh mujhe laga k "kya huwa meri Gaadi main/ko?"
Fir uske baad maine apne abu ko phone kiya aur unhe bataya/kaha to unhone kaha/bataya k shayad apki Gaadi ki battery kharab ho gyi hai, kyonke tumne/aapne kuch dinon se apni Gaadi istamal nahi ki hai,
toh uske baad maine apne dada ko phone kiya aur unhe bataya agar wo mujhe ek dukan lay jaa sekty hain, naya battery khareedne ke liye. aur unhone theek kaha toh phir hum dukan jate hai aur ek nayi battery khareedty hain
aur phir ghar wapis aate hain. jab hum ghar par pohonch chuky hain humne Gaadi me nayi battery lagayi aur phir hum Gaadi shuru kari/karte hain aur
Gaadi kaam kar rahi thi to koi masla nahi tha, toh mujhe laga k me apni Gaadi, taiz drive karne ke liye jaunga, takay main Gaadi ki kaarkardagi check kar sakoon.
do minutes k baad Gaadi dobara band ho jaati hai, toh pata nahi ab meri Gaadi ka kya masla .
me= I
mein= into/inside
"i have corrected it"
your text is mixture of Hindi and Urdu,
I would say "nice texting"
keep it up , you are good at it.
only some sentence framing mistakes wer there else it is better.
best of luck :)