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留学生从中国来到了 留学生在俄国平时住在莫斯科或圣彼得堡。这个地区很丰富。我住在西伯利亚。这个地区比莫斯科穷。那里的大学有国家的支持。但是几天前我听说3个留学生从中国来到了。我马上想当朋友给他们。但是我不知道他们的地址,并且我不能去忽然看看他们。有一天我在学校的餐厅一边喝茶,一边考虑我丢了钱。忽然我听了中文。三个姑娘在我后面下了。我决定了这是最好的机会开对话给中国人,所以然后我对他们说:你们好!他们奇怪了一些。我们开对话。他们说俄语说得流利,在大学学习俄语和英语。他们的家乡是北京。首先一个姑娘害羞对我说,但是然后她可以说流利。我们一起去来公园。在那里我们见面了我的朋友,他也学习韩语。我们一起逛附近的大学,突然 刮风了。朋友说:你们必须回来宿舍!别感冒了!我送你们到宿舍!去吧!他也对我说:你没有夹克。你去来家。今天我看看你因为我有事。我回来家。他很久没有来,我很为担心因为那个地区不是很安全。他到底来了。我说对他:我担心了!你为什么没有手机。他回答在街道下雨了,他没有带雨伞和手机。所以他在入口必须等雨止。宿舍离我家有很多米。现在我又渴又饿,我能不能请进?-对不起!请进吧!你有什么事?他说:下周我应该交英语考卷。你会帮助我吗?我不可以翻译课文。我回答我的英文不很好。可是我努力帮你!现在朋友在厨房在吃米饭和肉和喝茶。我翻译课文。 (Usually foreign students in Russia live in Moscow or St. Petersburg. These areas very rich. I live in Syberia. This area is more poor than Moscow region. They have support from goverment.But a few days ago I heard that 3 Chinese students came from China. I wanted to be a friend with them right away. But I didn't know their addres and furthermore I can't visit them suddenly. One day I drink tea at canteen and think about I lost my money. Suddenly I heard Chinese speech. 3 Chinese girls sat behind me. I decided that is the best chance to begin dialog with them, so then I said "ni hao" to them. They were wondered a little. I began the dialog. They speak Russian fluently, in the University they learn Russian and English. Their hometown is Beijing. At the beginning one girl shy to talk with me, but then she talk freely. We went to the park. There we met my friend, he learn Chinese too. We all together stroll around the University. and unexpectedly the wind blew. Friend said: You must come back to the dormitory. Don't catch cold! I I'll walk you dormitory. Go! He said to me: You don't have jacket. Come back to home! I'll visit you today because I have deal. I came back to home. He didn't come for a long time. I was worried about him those district is not safety. Eventually he came. I said him: I worried! Why you didn't call? He answered the rain(continue in comments
Nov 16, 2014 6:01 PM
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留学生从中国来到了西伯利亚的中国留学生 (Как в русском языке, тема по китайском языке тоже должна быть имя существительного)

留学生在俄国平时一般住在莫斯科或圣彼得堡。这个地区这些城市丰富富饶。我住在西伯利亚。这个地区比莫斯科穷。那里的大学有国家的支持。但是几天前我听说3个留学生从中国来到了西伯利亚。我马上想当朋友给他们跟他们交朋友。但是我不知道他们的地址,并且我不能忽然拜访看看他们。有一天我在学校的餐厅一边喝茶,一边考虑我想我丢了钱的事情。忽然我听了中文。三个姑娘在我后面下了。我决定了这是最好的机会开对话给中国人开始跟中国人对话,所以然后我对他们说:你们好!他们奇怪了一。我们开始对话。他们说俄语说得流利,在大学学习俄语和英语。他们的家乡是北京。首先一个姑娘害羞对我说(Здесь не очень понятно, но ты можешь хотить сказать: она была скромная? тогда мы говорим "一个姑娘刚开始有点不好意思说俄语"),但是然后后来她可以说得很流利。我们一起去公园。在那里我们见了我的朋友,他也学习韩语。我们一起逛附近的大学,突然 刮风了。朋友说:你们必须回(здесь используемся глагол "回去" или просто “回(宿舍、家、办公室)”. Если без предмета, обязательно сказать "回去"。)宿舍!别感冒了!我送你们到宿舍去吧!他对我说:你没有夹克。你去家。今天我看看你因为我有事。我回家。他很久没有来,我很为担心因为那个地区不是很安全。他到底最终(到底“в конце конков” а 最终“на конец”)回来了。我说对他:我担心!你为什么没有手机。他回答在街道外面(по-китайский это не "на улице" а "outside/ in the air"在外面)下雨了,他没有带雨伞和手机。所以他在入口必须等雨。宿舍离我家有好几米。现在我又渴又饿,我能不能进?-对不起!请进吧!你有什么事?他说:下周我应该交英语考卷。你会帮助我吗?我不可以翻译课文有困难(он вообще не мог? нет, у него трудность))) поэтому "有困难")。我回答我的英文不好。可是我尽力帮你!现在朋友在厨房在吃米饭和肉,喝着茶。我在给他翻译课文。

 

Я очень люблю твой город! Я была там летом на прошлом году. Новосибирск также второй родной  город моего мужа в России)) Он был там на целый год в 2011. Удачи!

November 26, 2014

He answered that the rain started in the street. He didn't take bring the umbrella and mobile phone. 他回答街道路上下雨了,他没有带雨伞和手机。So he must wait at porch the entrance till the rain ended when the rain ends. 所以他在入口必须等到雨停为止。Dormitory is too far away from my home. 宿舍离我家太远了有很多米。Now I'm thirsty and hungry. Can I come in? 现在我又渴又饿,我能不能?- Oh, sorry. Please, come in! -对不起!请进吧!what do you need to deal withWhat's the deal you have? 你有什么事?He said: In next week I must have to hand over my English report. Can you healp me? I can't translate the text. 他说:下周我应该必须要交英语报告考卷。你帮助我吗?我不会可以翻译课文文章。I answered that my English is not good.我回答我的英文不好。 But I'll try to help. 可是我努力尽力帮你!Now my friend is eating the rise rice with meat and drinking tea at my kitchen. I'm translating the text. 现在我朋友在厨房在吃米饭和肉和喝茶。我翻译课文文章
(FINALLY XD It's long, but well done)

November 16, 2014

Usually foreign students in Russia live in Moscow or St. Petersburg. 通常在俄罗斯的外国留学生都留学生在俄国平时住在莫斯科或圣彼得堡。These areas are very rich. 这个地区很丰富这些地方很繁华。I live in Syberia. This area is more poor poorerthan Moscow region. 我住在西伯利亚。这个地区比莫斯科穷。 They The universities there have supports from goverment the government.那里的大学有国家的支持。 But a few days ago I heard that there were 3 Chinese students came from China in school. 但是几天前我听说3个留学生从中国来学校。I wanted to be a friend with them right away. 我马上想他们当朋友。But I didn't know their address and furthermore I can't visit them so suddenly. 但是我不知道他们的地址,并且我不能这么突然就去看去忽然看看他们。One day I was drinking tea at canteen and thinking about that I had lost my money. 有一天我在学校的餐厅一边喝茶,一边考虑想着我丢了钱的事。Suddenly I heard Chinese speech. 忽然我听了中文。3 Chinese girls satwere sitting behind me.三个姑娘在我后面下了。 I decided realized that is was the best chance to begin dialog with them, so then I said "ni hao" to them. 我决定了发现这是最好的机会可以跟中国聊天开对话给中国人,所以然后我对他们说:你们好!They were wondered a little shocked.他们奇怪了一些她们有点吃惊I We began the dialog. 我们开始聊天开对话。They speak Russian fluently, in the University they learn Russian and English. 们说俄语说得流利,在大学学习俄语和英语。Their hometown is Beijing. 们的家乡是北京。At the beginning one of girls is too shy to talk with me, but then she talked freely. 首先一个姑娘害羞对我说,但是然后她可以说流利刚开始的时候,其中一个姑娘太害羞,不敢跟我说话,但是后来她聊得很开。We went to the park. There we met my friend, he is learning Chinese too. 我们一起去去了公园。在那里我们见面遇见了我的朋友,他也韩语汉语。We all together stroll around the University. and unexpectedly the wind blew. 我们一起逛附近的大学大学的 周围,突然刮风了。Friend said: You must come back to the dormitory. Don't catch cold! I I'll walk you dormitory. Go! 朋友说:你们必须回宿舍!别感冒了!我送你们到宿舍!吧!He said to me: You don't have jacket. Come back to Go home! 他也对我说:你没有夹克。你去来。I'll visit you today because I have something to deal with you.今天我看看你因为我有事我今天会去你家的,因为我有些事要跟你处理一下。 I came back to home. 我回家。He didn't come for till a long time. I was worried about him beacuse those district is not safety. 他很久没有来,我很担心他,因为那个地区不是很安全。Eventually he came. 他到底终于来了。I said him: I worried! Why you didn't call? 我说对他:我担心!你为什么不打电话没有手机

November 16, 2014
... started in ths street. He didn't take the umbrella and mobile phone. So he must wait at porch when the rain ends. Dormitory is too far away from my home. Now I'm thirsty and hungry. Can I come in? - Oh, sorry. Please, come in! What's the deal you have? He said: In next week I must hand over my English report. Can you help me? I can't translate the text. I answered that my English is not good. But I'll try to help. Now my friend eat the rise with meat and drink tea at my kitchen. I'm translating the text.
November 16, 2014
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