The higher education: my favorate work ____please modify for me ,,,thanks a lot i work in a medicall colleage in Zunyi city of maland china, it is located in the southwest fo china. There many high ma

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The higher education: my favorate work ____please modify for me ,,,thanks a lot i work in a medicall colleage in Zunyi city of maland china, it is located in the southwest fo china. There many high mantain and river, the clinmate is habitable, But i like the food best there.i work in the office, my main job is that handle some learning and teaching affairs, to service for the tearcher and students. i afford some teaching task also, it's my happier time that stay with my students ,they loved me so much .but , i turn to pursue the rearch in the research in higher education now. that's my best intereting.i will try my best to study,work hard ,do my best.i known there are many advanced experiencement in European an America,incloding Taiwan \ Hongkang\and so on.i would like to chat with you ,exchange our experience, my favourite hobby is playing basketball. of course ,l love NBA very much , if you have the same hobby you can contact with me , i love to make firends with people from different culture. i am looking foward you. by the way ,this is my first composition here, could somebody help me modifying it , pointing the mistike,and give me a score in your opinion. i will be appreciated so much . tns, best wishes to everybody.

Nov 18, 2014 6:18 AM

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Higher Education: My Biggest Interest

I work in a medical college in Zunyi, a Chinese city. It is located in the southwest of China. There are many high mountains and rivers. The climate is pleasing but i like the food best there. I work in the office and my main role is to handle learning and teaching affairs, and to assist the teachers and students. I also take on some teaching responsibilities.

Being with my students is one of my happiest moments as they love me so much but I have decided to pursue research work in higher education now. That's my biggest interest. I will try my best to study hard, work hard and to do my best. I know there are many advanced experiment techniques in Europe and America, as well as in Taiwan and Hongkong so I would like to chat with you and to exchange experiences.

My favourite hobby is playing basketball and naturally, l love NBA. If you have the same hobby, you can contact me as I love to make friends with people from different cultures. I am looking foward to communicating with you.

By the way, this is my first composition here so could someone help correct it for me by pointing out the mistakes and by giving it a score. I will appreciate this gesture so much. Thank you and best wishes to everybody.

你好。我已经帮你改了这篇文章。你表达的不错但是英文用来介绍自己的代词必须大写, 就如 "I"

November 19, 2014

The Higher Education: my favourite [use favorite if you prefer U.S.A standard English] work

I work in a medical college in Zunyi, a city located in the southwest of mainland China. There are many mountains and rivers, and the climate is habitable; however, I like the food best. I work in an office. My main job is handling learning and teaching affirs for teachers and students. I previously also had some teaching duties. That was a very happy time as my students [seemed] to love me! However, I have decided to pursue research in the area of higher education -- my favourite interest. I will try my best to study and work hard. I know there are many advances in this area in Europe, America, Taiwan, Hong Kong, and other countries.

I would like to chat with you to exchange our experiences.

My favourite hobby is playing basketball. I love NBA very much! If you have the same hobby, you can contact me -- I love to make friends with people from different cultures. I look forward to hearing from you.

November 21, 2014

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