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Two Hometown I am a second-tier city citizen,I come from Anhui province Wuhu city Nanling country town.In this hometown,I have my parents,my cousins,my dear aunt and my friends ,I love them,we grow up together ,besides we have a lot of common memory which were funny and hilarious.Before my 18 years old ,I lived there where was full of sour sweet bitter and spicy flavor. However,in my latter years ,one city becomes my second hometown in my mind.although I have no relatives there , it seems something exsits and strikes root there in the soil which named Chizhou. First It was the city which is my college in.I lived in Chizhou for five years when the time is the most beutiful that I couldn't forget. second ,time in that city gives me different meaning on my dream. for young man, most significant thing is their dream and future,it is same to me.In Chizhou ,my classmates whose conception was familiar were to hardwork for one thing what we called career despite every obstacles. Now you know why I have two hometowns,because these two give me two different meaning in my life ,whaterever,I need to thanks all they contribute to me.
Nov 20, 2014 12:10 PM
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Two Hometown

I am a second-tier city citizen,I come from Anhui province Wuhu city Nanling country town.In this hometown,I have my parents,my cousins,my dear aunt and my friends ,I love them,we grow up together ,besides we have a lot of common memory which were funny and hilarious.Before my 18 years old ,I lived there where was full of sour sweet bitter and spicy flavor.
However,in my latter years ,one city becomes my second hometown in my mind.although I have no relatives there , it seems something exsits and strikes root there in the soil which named Chizhou.
First It was the city which is my college in.I lived in Chizhou for five years when the time is the most beutiful that I couldn't forget. second ,time in that city gives me different meaning on my dream. for young man, most significant thing is their dream and future,it is same to me.In Chizhou ,my classmates whose conception was familiar similar were to hardwork for one thing what we called career despite every obstacles.
Now you know why I have two hometowns,because these two give me two different meaning in my life ,whaterever,I need to thanks all they contribute to me.

November 21, 2014

Two Hometown s

I am a second-tier city citizen,I come from Anhui province Wuhu city Nanling country town.In this hometown,I have my parents,my cousins,my dear aunt and my friends ,I love them,we grow up together ,besides we have a lot of common memory which were arefunny and hilarious.Before my 18 years old ,I lived there where was full of sour sweet bitter and spicy flavor.
However,in my latter years ,one city becomes my second hometown in my mind.although I have no relatives there , it seems something exsits and strikes root there in the soil which named Chizhou.
First(because) It was the city which is my college in.I lived in Chizhou for five years when the time is the most beutiful that I couldn't forget. second ,time in that city gives me different meaning on my dream. for young man, most significant thing is their dream and future,it is same to me.In Chizhou ,my classmates whose conception was familiar were to hardwork for one thing what we called career despite every obstacles.
Now you know why I have two hometowns,because these two give me two different meaning in my life ,whaterever,I need to thanks all they contribute to me.

November 20, 2014
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