Hicran
Please correct my entry :) Wuhuu!! I am so happy today. One of reason is my brother will come to here, the other ones I received my first salary.I will keep it till he will come. When he will come to here I don't concern about that.
Nov 20, 2014 9:17 PM
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Please correct my entry :)

Wuhuu!!
I am so happy today. One of reasons is my brother will come here, the other one is; I received my first salary.I will keep it till he comes. When he will come here, I don't concern about that.

November 20, 2014

Please correct my entry :)

Wuhuu!!
I am so happy today. One of the reasons is my brother will come to is coming here,; the other ones is I received my first salary. I will keep it till until he will come arrives. When he will come to gets here, I don't won't be concerned about that.

November 20, 2014
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