Wen.Huang
Great lyrics always have wonderful rhythms What kind you songs do you like best? I prefer songs that have great lyrics and wonderful rhythms. And great lyrics always have wonderful rhythms. ‘Yesterday once more’ by Carpenters is one of my favorite songs since I was a little boy. When I was about five years old, I listened this song accidentally, I didn’t even know the meaning of the words, but I was moved by the rhythm. When I grew up, I knew the meaning of the words by learning English and I was moved by the beautiful lyrics once again. ‘When I was young I listen to the radio Waiting for my favorite songs When they played I’d sing It made me smile Those were such happy times. …’ When I am listening to the song, a lot of feelings come to my mind. The lyrics recalled the days of childhood to me. When I was a little boy, I lived near the sea with my parents. There was a inaccessible area. And I was lonely. At that time, I liked listen to the radio because it make me feel happy. I could listen many beautiful songs, although I didn’t know what they mean but I still like them very much. Sometimes I would sing along and didn’t feel lonely any more. It was a good time. Thank you for correcting my grammar mistakes. :)
Nov 21, 2014 2:36 AM
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Great lyrics always have wonderful rhythms

What kind you songs do you like best? I prefer songs that have great lyrics and wonderful rhythms. And great lyrics always have wonderful rhythms. ‘Yesterday once more’ by Carpenters is one of my favorite songs since I was a little boy. When I was about five years old, I listened this song accidentally, I didn’t even know the meaning of the words, but I was moved by the rhythm. When I grew up, I knew the meaning of the words by learning English and I was moved by the beautiful lyrics once again.
‘When I was young I listen to the radio
Waiting for my favorite songs
When they played I’d sing
It made me smile
Those were such happy times.
…’
When I am listening to the song, a lot of feelings come to my mind. The lyrics recalled the days of childhood to me. When I was a little boy, I lived near the sea with my parents. There was a an inaccessible area. And I was lonely. At that time, I liked listen to the radio because it make me feel happy. I could listen to many beautiful songs, although I didn’t know what they mean meant but I still like them very much. Sometimes I would sing along and didn’t feel lonely any more.
It was a good time.




Thank you for correcting my grammar mistakes. :)

November 21, 2014
Yes, I first heard this song on the radio. One of my fondest memories as a child is listening to the radio. By the way, I am Chinese. But I really like songs in Japanese, Japanese anime and Japanese TV drama and I am learning Japanese. :) At that time, this song was very popular in China in my mind. After I started school, our English teacher often play this song in class.
November 21, 2014
Amazing that you would run across an old American song in Japan. Did you first hear it on the radio?
November 21, 2014
Great job, Xiaoming!
November 21, 2014
I also really like this song! I'm playing it now. Thank you for the reminder!
November 21, 2014
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