Annie Liang
Earth is showing his power An unbelievable heavy snow has assaulted New York and other states of America. Gale-force wind together with wet and slippery roads put the whole country into a dilemma. Temperatures in all 50 states fell to freezing or below on Tuesday and low temperatures were more reminiscent of January than November. Two Danmark tourists were caught off-guard by those abnormal weather as if they were in their own country now. The snow was so heavy that even buying a pizza at the end of the street is a vain hope. Officials is taking pains to take measures, wish they will ride out soon.
Nov 21, 2014 3:37 AM
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Earth is Showing his its Power

An unbelievably heavy snow has assaulted New York and other states of America. Gale-force winds together with wet and slippery roads put the whole country into a dilemma [we can also say "tailspin"]. Temperatures in all 50 states fell to freezing or below on Tuesday and low temperatures were more reminiscent of January than November.

Two Danish tourists were caught off-guard by those the abnormal weather [how were they caught off-guard? what did they say?] as if they were in their own country now. The snow was so heavy that even buying a pizza at the end of the street is a vain hope. Officials is are at taking pains to take measures [take mesures for what?], wish and hope they will ride out the weather/storm soon.

November 21, 2014
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