王逸晨Jessica
I'm not happy In the China,students have many homework.They don't have weekend.They must to learn Chinese,Math,English,Physics,Politics,Geography,Biology,History.They don't have friends.They don't have partys.They just have class,teacher,notebook and their homework! 在中国,学生有许多作业。他们没有周末。他们必须去学语文,数学,英语,物理,政治,生物,地理,历史。他们没有朋友,他们没有派对,他们只有课堂,老师,笔记本和他们的作业!
Nov 21, 2014 3:07 PM
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I'm not happy

In the China, students have many a lot of homework.  They don't have free time on the weekend.  They must to learn Chinese, Math, English, Physics, Politics, Geography, Biology, and History.  They don't have friends [1].  They don't have partys parties.  They just have classes, teachers, notebooks and their homework!

 

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[1] I think you mean, "They don't have time with friends."

 

Please add a space (' ') after every comma (',') and full stop ('.').

November 21, 2014

你好, 你该改 partys 成为 parties; class,teacher  成为 classes, teachers 来表达你自己有很多课程,每个课程也有不同的老师. 还有, 没有 must + to V, 而是 must + V => Must learn. 

 

只在帮你改改, 没什么意思,希望你快完成功课吧! 很高兴如果可以啃你交个朋友, 谢谢! 晚安 ^^

 

November 21, 2014
It is unfortunate that you are not happy. Guess you will have to decide what you can change in your life that will yield you some satisfaction and happiness.
November 21, 2014
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