About myself

My name is Yana. I'm from Russia. I'm 24 years old. I graduated from university in 2011 (the specialist programme in state management) and 2013 (the masters programme in strategic management). So, you can understand I like studying)).  I like learning <em>the</em> foreign languages, too. I adore French. I can speak <em>in</em> it, but not very well because I haven't had any practice during the past three years. Now I'm studying English because it is currently more important for me <em>now</em> and for my professional growth. I'd like to speak<em>ing</em> English perfectly and I try to improve it every day after work. In general, I think it is so interesting and remarkable to speak fluently in another language).

Yana, as you can see you have made very few mistakes.  However, you need to combine some of your shorter sentences into one long sentence; e.g., "My name is Yana, and I'm a 24-year-old Russian."  Or, "I adore French: I can speak it, but not... ."  Focus on conjunctions and connecting phrases in your study of English, and try to write longer sentences.