王春燕
Can we be friends? Hi,i come from China,i'm a student,an outgoing girl! My favorite subject is English so i want improve my English ,at the same time make more different friends!! I like to listening to music and my favorite singer is HeTu.I also like to eat Xifan,it's my daily dinner,Yummy!i love.my mom!Today i had an exam,i hope i can get a good grades.
Nov 22, 2014 11:59 AM
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Can we be friends?

Hi, I <--always capitalize the single letter "I" come am from China, I'm <--- you also capitalize the "I" here because you are talking about yourself a student and an outgoing girl! My favorite subject is English, so I want to improve my English and at the same time make more different new friends!! I like to listening to music and my favorite singer is HeTu. I also like to eat Xifan, it's my daily dinner, yummy! I love my mom! Today I had an exam and I hope i can to get a good grades.

 

I understand that it is becoming more and more common when texting and messaging friends, etc. not to capitalize the letter "I". Please try to remember though that this is NOT proper grammar for writing. Since you are still learning the language try to do it properly, OK? Another thing, watch your "spacing". Be sure you put spaces in-between all words and not like you did above, for example:

Xifan,it's my daily dinner,Yummy!i love.my mom!Today i had an exam,i hope i can get a good grades. <----this is bad grammar

 

Keep up the good work!

Jerry (English teacher/tutor)

 

November 22, 2014
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