Mahsa
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Please correct my mistakes If possible.UK Telephon Calls, by Category, 19995-2002. The chart shows how was the time spend by UK residents on different types of telephone calls from 1995 to 2002. Local- fixed line calls increased from 72 billion minutes in1995 to 90 billion minutes in 1999. But just the same amounts it decreased from 1999 to 2002. National and international – fixed line calls raised gradually from 38 billion to 61 billion minutes in 2001. In 2001 till 2002 National and international – fixed calls was approximately without any change. Between 1995 and 2002 using mobiles calls grew significantly and considerably from 2 billion to 46 billion minutes, So that use of mobile tripled between 1999 to 2002. At all we can see despite the considerably and sever gap in using different types of calls between in 1995 to 2000 , this gap significantly reduced to 2002. Please correct my mistakes. I will be so grateful.
Nov 22, 2014 4:50 PM
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Please correct my mistakes, if possible.

UK Telephone Calls, by Category, 1995-2002.

The chart shows how was the much time spend was spent by UK residents on different types of telephone calls from 1995 to 2002.
Local fixed-line calls increased from 72 billion minutes in 1995 to 90 billion minutes in 1999. But they decreased by almost the same amount just the same amounts it decreased from 1999 to 2002.
National and international fixed-line calls raised  gradually from 38 billion minutes [when? in 1995?] to 61 billion minutes in 2001. In From 2001 till to 2002 the number of national and international fixed-line calls was almost unchanged. approximately without any change.
Between 1995 and 2002 using the number of mobiles calls grew significantly and considerably from 2 billion to 46 billion minutes. So that The use of mobile phones tripled between 1999 to 2002.

At all Finally, we can see despite that the considerable and sever gap in using different types of calls between in from 1995 to 2000 , this gap  lessened significantly by reduced to 2002.
Please correct my mistakes. I would be so grateful.

 

<em>till </em>is spoken English, almost never written except in dialog. Use <em>until.</em>

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<em>Moblie phones or mobiles in UK. Cell phones in US.</em>

November 22, 2014
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